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Silky Glass Smile

This here, is God’s joke
Give a man a daughter,
A fist, and booze
Her benediction from a
Caustic Lord
Look, funny, she’s got a new bruise

“Break me”, she should have begged
Instead, a comically slow
Self-destruction
Burlesque, she and Fear
Tragically tripping
On Fate’s seduction

Oh yes, she’s clever
Led blind by the force
Of imperfection
A smoke-screen forced with
Her silky glass smile-
Her failed resurrection

Look now, how ironic
She slays Abuse with a
Sororal blade
She’ll sanctify a past of ruin
By waltzing with silver
Now, watch her Fade

by fade
posted on 02/08/2009

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Comment by Acheron: Mar 28, 2009 11:49 pm
i wish i had your talent.
its a wonderful read.
Comment by fade: Feb 8, 2009 10:07 pm
Please Know! In the poem, I was cynical. I don't think abuse is funny. I wasn't mocking neglect- I was mocking "God," and myself.
Comment by 0oAngelo0: Feb 8, 2009 10:56 pm
why mocking yourself??
Comment by littleford94: Feb 8, 2009 11:44 pm
WOW!!love it.... Go mocking god.. if he exists i hate him! Smiley
Comment by monkeyboy2416: Feb 9, 2009 1:31 am
This is just stunning.
Sororal blade...
You have left me devoid of anything to say that's not redundant, so i shall resort to profanity.
Fucking amazing.
Comment by darksideofme: Feb 9, 2009 1:41 pm
O.o *Speechless Face*
Comment by SilentWords: Feb 11, 2009 12:52 pm
well written, this is a great poem, brillant and moving!!
Comment by BloodLustingElf: Feb 12, 2009 2:18 am
Shiver. Wow fade that was wonderful. I loved it. This is an outstanding poem, the word usage is phenomonal. The imagery is unbelievable. You have outdone yourself.
Comment by FavoriteTheMute: Feb 14, 2009 11:49 am
I agree wholeheartedly with my fellow critics! THIS IS GREAT! And it couldn't be put more succinctly than the way monkeyboy expressed his admiration. Fucking Amazing indeed! Bravissimo!
Comment by SoLittleTime: Feb 15, 2009 12:01 am
i loved all of it, but with me the first and last stanzas really hit home.
monkeyboy put it perfectly, fucking amazing.


a failed resurrection.... thats how i feel most of the time
Comment by monkeyboy2416: Feb 20, 2009 6:20 pm
Ah, but i love this.
This will not be my last read...nor my last comment!
I agree with that monkeyboy fella!!
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