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Scream My Name

When you call my name, don’t whisper.
When you sing my song, don’t cry.
Never speak of my death with sadness.
I’m sorry that I had to die.

When you lay that rose, be happy.
When you say that prayer, be gay.
My funeral is no time for sorrow,
But the birth of a brand new day.

Please know that my life was wasted
On my ever-constant mistakes.
Please now that I am spared now,
From the pain I could no longer take.

When you call my name, scream it loudly.
And listen to it echo back alone.
Maybe you should have been there all my life,
Instead of leaving a little girl on her own.

by fade
posted on 06/28/2008

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Comment by deadlyinluv24: Jun 30, 2008 1:19 pm
beautifuly wrote amazing!!!!! i luv it u have such a talent.......keep it up!!!! if u need to talk bout ne thing we r all here for u!!!!! but the poem is great and the emotion is fantastic amazing job!!!
Comment by FadingAway: Jul 1, 2008 4:35 pm
Love it.
Comment by jacobc: Jul 1, 2008 10:43 am
Very nice, Give this to whoever youy were writing about! See what they think ;)
Comment by kitten546: Jul 1, 2008 11:19 am
REALLY REALLY GOOD>.<!!!!
Comment by trinipoet18: Jul 6, 2008 11:57 am
wow thatz deep
Comment by blackinatedsnow: Jul 28, 2008 8:44 am
So deep and emotional. I love it.
Comment by ems: Jul 26, 2008 10:07 pm
this is amazing.
you have incredible talent!
keep on writing and never give up hope!
Comment by LadyInsanity: Jul 26, 2008 2:45 pm
You have incredible talent. Great meter and the rhyme scheme suits the poem well. Very raw with lots of emotion. Keep up the great work.
Comment by ImThatBloodyMassacre: Jun 28, 2008 11:40 am
holy shit.
I love this.
It is amazing.
...you are not going to kill yourself are you?
If you are, please don't.
^-^
Comment by fade: Jun 28, 2008 1:03 pm
No. I'm not. Promise.
Comment by ashuhhland: Jun 28, 2008 9:11 pm
omg this is so full of emotion. i love it. awesome job
Comment by BEAUTIFULPHATMAMA: Jun 29, 2008 6:46 pm
ALRIGHT POEM

"GOD BLESS"!!
Comment by lostinpoetry: Jul 3, 2008 9:38 pm
Bloody good!!!
Comment by tgunz: Jul 7, 2008 7:30 am
I like your closing, it's a bit of a surprising jab after feeling like a positive for those left behind. Good work!
Comment by portugej11: Jul 9, 2008 3:52 am
well written, flows great...keep up the good work
Comment by LightHearted: Jul 27, 2008 6:47 am
you are an excelent tallent and i love you work
Comment by idontwannabeinlove: Jul 10, 2008 8:37 pm
the wording is great.
Comment by TaintedThorn: Jul 24, 2008 1:53 am
wow...i love it...really great poem...it gave me the chills...
Comment by fallen: Jul 10, 2008 8:21 pm
good job, I love the wording
Comment by xxBlackRainbowxx: Jul 13, 2008 2:09 am
wow. pretty deep. i love it! its awesome!
Comment by AshleyDawn: Jul 17, 2008 4:33 pm
omg i love this it was the first poem i read on this iste and its still my favorite!!!!its great
Comment by LadyMorpheus: Jul 20, 2008 7:54 pm
Reminds me of how I want my funeral to be.
Comment by lalalalax: Jul 22, 2008 11:03 pm
i really like it.
Comment by darknessfallsuponme: Jul 24, 2008 7:02 am
holy shit..you've got alot of talent dont let it go 2 waste like i use 2..beautifully wrote and filled with emotion.
Comment by darkangel122: Aug 19, 2008 3:23 pm
Wow... I really love it. Nice work.
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