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Russian Roulette

Click.
Safe, again.
Another pass,
another pull,
another baited breath let loose.
Click.
Shaking, we look at each other,
knowing our luck is running thin.
I take the gun and raise it,
close my eyes, and pull.
Click.
My heart skips a beat,
and I drunkenly wonder…
If I won’t lose this game,
which one of us will?
Click.
He reaches for the gun,
but drops it.
He can’t see straight, and the
alcohol slurs his words for him.
I pick it up,
hand it off,
and he pulls.
Click.
Her hand shakes as she
grasps the cold metal.
This game of ours is far from safe,
but our hazy minds don’t stop us.
I look at her through clouded eyes,
and watch her pull.
Bang.
My world turns from
black and white to
red,
and I can hardly register
the blood soaking the carpet as the
gun hits the ground.
Our game is over.
We can go home now.

by PrettyOdd
posted on 06/27/2008

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Comment by timewornsoul: Jun 27, 2008 9:22 pm
Wow man...That is some dark deep shit. I really really like this one.
Comment by PoemWritingGuy: Jun 28, 2008 5:48 am
Really dark poem. Is this what Russian Roulette really is?
Comment by ForeverAndAlways: Jun 28, 2008 8:54 am
Wow I agree with the comments above....it's really deep. I love it.!
Comment by freespirit252: Jun 28, 2008 4:55 pm
I really like this one because it can make me cry, having played the so called game and losing my bestest friend. It is very deep which I always say makes for a better poem.
Comment by asdfyz: Jun 28, 2008 6:16 pm
HOLY SHIT! this is so deep. Not only does it mix tragedy and sunspense and amazing writing, but it (unless you are lying, which i doubt) mixes in truth too!!

It is scary shit. I like it, but i also don't (no offense, if you know what i mean). kinda like too much of a good thing in a way
Comment by dontXgetXlostXinXheaven: Jun 28, 2008 7:55 pm
wow thats a perfect reprentaion of russian roulette i think it is a very well writen poem keep it up i give it a 10
Comment by ashuhhland: Jun 28, 2008 8:24 pm
whoa. thats kinda creepy in like a good way though.
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