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Romeo and Juliet...part 2

You fool
Take on Shakespeare's words
Claim to be him...
Claim to be that "lovestruck" teen

You do realize that Romeo was an idiot right?
He fell in love with Juliet in the midsts of a night and proceeded to propose in the timeline of three days
They then killed themselves
Over hormones
Over foolish thoughts
I can't live without her...
How would you even know?

But I'm hoping you take from their example
If you're going to throw your life away
Why not go all out?
It'd be fun to watch your downfall

Take your Juliet
Embrace, kiss of her poisoned lips
This time I promise there will be enough for you to follow her to Hades
I'll make sure of it

So run throughout the play, go over the lines
Make your lovestory eternal
Because thruthfully it wasn't and never shall be love


Your story shall serve as what we should tell our children
"Don't fall head over heels so quickly...don't be like them"

by UnsafeSanctuary
posted on 05/24/2008

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Comment by asdfyz: May 26, 2008 10:03 am
hmm. good view of the story, but (no offense) it isnt much of a poem from the look and flow of it.

It has great word choice but it seems more of like it is jsut a statement, not a poem.

Comment by mariana: May 26, 2008 6:21 am
I know who this is about... and it's lovly... dark... warning... I love it, baby. I love you.
Comment by Catwoman772: Jun 3, 2008 11:04 am
i love tht!!!
omg amazing!
Comment by AngelicallyBroken: May 24, 2008 11:28 am
wow...very good poem,dark but i love it!
Comment by singlebaby: Jun 15, 2008 2:23 pm
that's how i felt when i red the book.
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