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rest in peices

tangled
strangled
ripped and torn
pulled apart at the seams
i am shaking
my mind breaking
anger roaring in my ears
i cant take it
I WILL BREAK YOU
MY EYES ARE FLARING RED
I JUMP AT YOU
I LUNGE FOR YOU
YOU
ARE
DEAD
r.i.p
rest
in
peices

by shadowofasoul
posted on 01/08/2008

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Comment by Darryn732: Jan 8, 2008 6:33 pm

I like it

Comment by EmoPoetry: Jan 8, 2008 9:21 pm

This is a very emotional poem...
I love it.

Comment by NoMoreSorrow: Jan 8, 2008 9:32 pm

i like this poem its real good.....emotion felt

Comment by shadowofasoul: Jan 8, 2008 9:33 pm

thank you all for the comments

Comment by footprints: Jan 8, 2008 11:50 pm

I love the title.. instead of rest in peace, you use 'pieces' (spelling). Powerful stuff Smiley

Comment by Mangekyo: Jan 9, 2008 11:57 am

Very good use of poetic skills. I love this poem.

Comment by xXxScreamMeToSleepxXx: Jan 9, 2008 12:41 pm

^_^ Very good.
Emotional.
Write more.
xXxScreamxXx

Comment by Tequilla: Jan 10, 2008 11:42 am

I like this. Emotion. Good poem.

Comment by loveseekerhatefinder: Jan 10, 2008 12:14 pm

heh heh...nice poem, I like how you rhmed..lol^^ vote up

Comment by forevergone1790: Jan 10, 2008 1:29 pm

i love the poem also i agree with emopoetry: it is very emotional... but it was a great poem. good job

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