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Sons Of Repose

Gun metal blue
and polished brass
combine into darkest red
Fertile is the field
of battles past
where the sons of repose
have bled
While steel and fire
devour the night
and blacken the
hearts of men
No Man's Land
is a futile fight
to be waged
again and again

The games of youth
hold such lies,
as death mingles with mud
The realities of war
are nothing more,
than lies, death and blood
Glory is a story,
with no mention of lead
and tears upon the sleeve
Romance dwells not,
in the eyes of the dead,
as their light forever leaves

Incompetence commands
that only cowards would stay
in the luxury of their hole
Truth has a stench
that may never depart,
as it permeates through
to the soul
And images can speak
much louder than words,
as they paint the
truth to perfection
For, the truth
is painted in red
and denies the lie's
protection

by grunty
posted on 10/27/2009

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Comment by Fathom: Oct 27, 2009 8:03 pm
Wow... that's very strong.
Comment by Telemachus: Oct 27, 2009 10:12 pm
I dunno - maybe if we all had to go off to fight with swords and muskets, life would become clearer.

It's the depersonalisation of war that is obscene. Maybe it's alright if you can look into the bugger's eyes as you put him to the sword.
Comment by monkeyboy2416: Oct 28, 2009 5:18 am
For, the truth
is painted in red
and denies the lie's
protection

That's a great final clout.

True too, old men talking and young men dying.
Comment by SilentWords: Oct 28, 2009 9:42 am
Romance dwells not,
in the eyes of the dead,
as their light forever leaves

Oo, I love that.

Fertile is the field
of battles past
where the sons of repose
have bled

You took an ugly truth and made it into beauty! And I agree with Monkey, the ending was brilliant.



Comment by flippinthrulife17: Oct 28, 2009 4:44 pm
WOW......wow...

This is so deep. So dreadfully...True...
so...dreadful. Period
but written so-well,

an image you've portrayed to me,
that will haunt me,

wow...*votes up*
Comment by AndThePointIs: Oct 28, 2009 6:26 pm
wow, this is amazing. *votes up*
Comment by false: Oct 29, 2009 1:21 pm
it is wow. crazily amazing.
Comment by Rocco: Oct 30, 2009 10:56 am
awesome!
Comment by PrettyOdd: Oct 30, 2009 2:25 pm
...holy crap.
This is amazing, Grunty. Truly amazing. I love the way it rolls off my tongue when I read it.
Wonderful poem.
Comment by Tinkerbellpixie: Nov 15, 2009 7:16 pm
"And images can speak
much louder than words,
as they paint the
truth to perfection
For, the truth
is painted in red
and denies the lie's
protection"

Wow. Simply put, brilliant write.
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