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Realization

I once stumbled blindly in this world,
trying to figure out the purpose of my life,
when I realized that I am not in control of my life.... the Gods are.
We live on a chess board, where,
we are the pieces, the Gods are the players, and our fate.....
already decsided for us....
ironic is it not? They give us the power to choose our way in life,
yet they decside what we are to do in it.

by Raistlin99
posted on 03/16/2008

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Comment by Darryn732: Mar 17, 2008 1:10 am
good poem
Comment by crazyforcodymylove: Mar 17, 2008 4:48 am
wow i like this poem wow great job i use to feel like this especially the first line got to me the most
"I once stumbled blindly in this world
trying to find the purpose of my life"
wow i like it great job
Comment by poeticmarioomy: Mar 17, 2008 5:39 am
nice poem.
Comment by shyhallow: Mar 17, 2008 7:59 pm
I wanted to say welcome back Smiley I've missed reading your writings. They are always thought-provoking, and enjoyable to read.

Great work.
Comment by Raistlin99: Mar 19, 2008 8:32 pm
thank you it is good to be back!
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