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rain

as i stand alone
in my room
no light
just the flash form the storm
i think back to what i did
what i still do
i cant help it
i cant stop it
its an addiction i cant break
something i cant stop
as i look out the window
all the demons
the demos in me rage
they urge me to take it
just one time
but iv done it just one time
and i did it
over and over again
i start to walk
over to the door
i step outside
i can hear the sweet rain
hitting the ground under me
its wet and cold
but i love it
i heard a voice
step out in the rain
i did
all my black eyeliner runs
the demons scream and rage
but i stay there
because the rain sets me free
free from everything
it felt so good
until it stopped............
step out in the rain wash your demons away
for awhile

by cutupangelofdeath
posted on 07/02/2008

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Comment by fade: Jul 2, 2008 10:30 am
Holy Shit.
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This is really good. I LOVE how you tied the rain in through it. Beautiful in a poetic sense, but not overdone. Great job!!!
Comment by asdfyz: Jul 2, 2008 8:55 am
this is really sad. I hope you are able to get over this. I wish the best for you

Great poem. The imagery.. wow it is truly amazing.
Comment by HeartlessAngel: Oct 14, 2008 2:18 pm
Amazing poem. It took my breath away.
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