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Rage

My eyes are popping,
My mouth is frothing,
My mind is bulging,
It's all confusing,
I'm clenching a fist,
I'm locking my wrist,
I'm not showing remorse,
He's going down with force,
A crown is merging,
All heads are turning,
Stories are stirred,
Words are slurred...

He hit's the ground,
Teachers gather 'round,
The buzz is dead,
His nose is red,
Now I'm scared,
The teachers stared,
I looked at the floor,
I was feeling poor...

Teacher going sick,
said I was thick,
Corridoor gets shorter,
As the door comes closer,
Behind was the head,
Ignored what he said,
Level 3 detention,
Now I'm working on redemption!

by MindTwister
posted on 01/29/2008

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Comments: 15
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Comment by teardrops: Jan 29, 2008 7:03 pm
Wow i like this poem. it mey be short but it is good!!! i love the words you used to desribe everything!!!
I am going to VOTE UP!!!!Smiley GOOD JOB KEEP WRITTING SWEETIE
Comment by MindTwister: Jan 29, 2008 7:05 pm
Thanks Smiley I want to prove to people though im only 13 and iv had i rough life i can do something good with my life
Comment by darksideofme: Jan 29, 2008 7:40 pm
Yeah its pretty good. I look froward to seeing more of your poems. Good job.
Comment by MindTwister: Jan 29, 2008 7:41 pm
thanks
Comment by RoseNthorns: Jan 29, 2008 7:48 pm
omg...wow..thats deep....iliked it alot :]
Comment by sweetxdreamsXOXO: Jan 29, 2008 7:50 pm
Wow...
"A crown is merging,
All heads are turning,.."
I can't really see that in my ming. I agree with teardrops, you did a fabulous job with this poem. Vote up.
Comment by NicholasScott: Jan 29, 2008 7:52 pm
great poem:0
Comment by MindTwister: Jan 29, 2008 8:02 pm
Thanks Smiley
Comment by KMUFFiN12: Jan 30, 2008 8:30 am
thats a rly good poem.
its like a story but with more meaning and its str8 to the point.
Comment by virtualbubblewrap: Jan 30, 2008 8:51 am
THIS POEM IS AWESOME!! Smiley Smiley Smiley SmileySmiley its rated a 5 smile by me great job!!
Comment by funkyninja898: Jan 30, 2008 1:14 pm
great poem, i like the words describing everything, very well thought out. Smiley
Comment by MindTwister: Jan 30, 2008 3:28 pm
Thanks Smiley its nice to hear people like my poem
Comment by HeartlessAngel: Jan 31, 2008 10:22 am
amazingly awesome poem.
Comment by MindTwister: Jan 31, 2008 10:59 am
Thanks Smiley
Comment by meltedsnowman: Feb 19, 2008 11:37 am
wickedly awsome poem..good job!
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