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Pure Joy

He lies there crumpled
Wavering between life and death
Unsure of which is worse
The sickening stench of defeat
Fills his bloody nostrils
As he fights to survive
With minimal success
I can only stare with glee
At his broken, swollen body
Tears spewing out of his eyes
Like the blood from his mouth
How weak
Savoring this moment
I enthusiastically plunge a blade
Between his crying eyes
Observing as his shock and despair
Fill them silently
Before they grow dead
It is so hysterical
How he didn't see this coming
And for the first time in a long time
As I study his mangled corpse
I actually feel
Happy

by Bellatrix
posted on 08/13/2009

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Comment by prettyspl: Aug 27, 2009 10:48 pm
Just wickedly SICK .. on so many levels. What a mind you must have, I'd love to dig around inside it! LOL
Comment by SilentWords: Aug 13, 2009 9:30 am
HaHa... dark humor is always great.
Comment by tophat9: Aug 13, 2009 11:00 am
hah Nice, Good work
Comment by kazedragon: Aug 13, 2009 2:14 pm
...This is great. ^^ I love the way it flows.
Comment by tealtear: Aug 13, 2009 3:00 pm
I agree with kazedragon, this flows amazingly! Very very dark, good job.
Comment by AngelShadow: Aug 14, 2009 6:59 am
H ehe he! this is uhh a litlle scary and yet I find it hystarical. How twisted is that?

Any way good write.
Comment by LunaGetsuna: Aug 14, 2009 6:23 pm
That is fucked up... no offense; it is written beautifully, but it is scary as hell.
Comment by joschman: Aug 15, 2009 9:22 pm
happiness is a mangled corpse.
lol. I like it.
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