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poem or suicide note

Every one was born to die
your only living in a lie
I hate all of you and only love the hate
Nothing is out there that’s worth the wait
I want you all to feel my pain
To feel the glares that make me insane
I hope all the pain makes you cry
I hope you all suffer when you die
I hate the feeling of being alone
I can’t survive this way on my own
But you can’t help, no one can
My life was over before it began

by sajinn
posted on 04/22/2008

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Comment by deadrose37: Jun 21, 2008 10:15 pm
Your feelings are my feelings. People out there just don't get it. Their miserable lives mean nothing to us. Ours are worse and for that we get revenge on those who take their misery and turn it into ours. Or at least that's one sentence of what I feel.
Comment by AngelIndeed: Apr 22, 2008 8:53 am
I know how that feels.....
Comment by Freewriter91: Apr 22, 2008 9:02 am
Omfg i love it so much!@
Comment by foreverendeavor1790: Apr 22, 2008 9:15 am
yeah!! me too love it!!..
Comment by hiddeninblood: Apr 22, 2008 9:30 am
awesome poem...i also know how that feels...
Comment by 4evrdead: Apr 22, 2008 10:11 am
wow...this is really good and i can really relate to it...i wish ppl could feel my pain so they would kno how much i am hurting...
Comment by ashen: Apr 22, 2008 10:06 pm
i love the way that this flows and i can really relate to what your saying here. if it was used as a suicide note then it would give someone a huge wake up call
Comment by deadlyinluv24: Apr 23, 2008 10:46 am
i can relate all of us have those times. its realy good. im jelouse. hope can just be 1/millionth as good
Comment by NartDakhqan: Apr 23, 2008 10:59 am
very catchy.hope to write a poem of my own that can match that.
Comment by NartDakhqan: Apr 23, 2008 11:00 am
very catchy.hope to write a poem of my own that can compete with that.
Comment by MechanicalAnimal: Apr 23, 2008 12:17 pm
Great poem, but if I'm too be honest, the title sucks.
Comment by DeathKitty: Apr 25, 2008 9:33 am
Woah...It's so deep. You rhyme so wonderfully, I can only wish to write like you. I hope you feel better someday.
Comment by sajinn: Apr 26, 2008 3:31 pm
no one asked you machanicalanimal!!!!!!!
Comment by zoe: May 28, 2008 10:34 am
great i feelt that way a lot
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