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Patient.

"Put me under."
Says the patient as he bleeds profusely
Shaking her head
Nurse says "No,
You'll want to feel this greatly"

The bed is all dressed up in straps
Buckled down and he is trapped
Nurse covers his wound with two pretty colored bandages
One pink and one blue
Smiling, she says, "I know what this does to you."

Springing him upwards
She adjusts the helmet to his head
She tells him "Watch this,"
And he prays that he'll soon be dead

Drowned out in music
Drowned out in memories
He can't escape it
Just prays through those bandages he'll bleed

He's running through the virtual reality
He sees everything
Screaming stop it
There is no escape from your past.

Nurse leaves the room
Dims the light and hopes it lasts.

by Atwood
posted on 06/21/2008

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Comment by Atwood: Jun 23, 2008 7:23 am
this isn't literal.
just.. to verify. oO
Comment by tearsofrain: Jun 22, 2008 7:45 pm
i see now.
Comment by Cry: Jun 21, 2008 11:15 pm
pretty cool... really deep, almost hard to understand, but it's still good. it has that ability to wrack your brain when you're done with it, like "what did I just read?" lol... I read it twice... it's definitely worth the read... going deep enough you could call this a fight with your conscience... or if you were aiming to be literal, you could call it what it is... the patient getting bad treatment... really good read nontheless...


hit me up...
Comment by tearsofrain: Jun 21, 2008 5:09 pm
freewriter doesn't get it.
not like attention does.

i always think maybe i get it. but then i figure i don't. and later i find out i do.
Comment by Freewriter91: Jun 21, 2008 3:26 pm
omg .... wow i am speechless that is such a cool poem amazing way you put the words together keep going ~!
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