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only a dream

august rush- cold september
chilling november- frozen december
these birch trees look like skeletal hands
reaching up and up
clawing at the sky.
this field, feels supressing, snowflakes fall
i suppose there should be a serene quietness,
but i cant shake this feeling-
a sublime sadness, even an underlying malice
hidden in the landscape.
this place is not meant for human feet to tread
inexplicable desires, strange dream thoughts
i feel the heat of hidden eyes
i turn and fall;
waking to find- it was only a dream-
"only a dream"

by meltedsnowman
posted on 11/05/2009

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Comment by xDestructive: Nov 5, 2009 9:39 pm
WoW That was incredible! Great imagery, and very clever I must say, I really loved these lines..

"these birch trees look like skeletal hands
reaching up and up
clawing at the sky."

woah! that is great! amazing poem all around.... good job!

ups!
Comment by flippinthrulife17: Nov 6, 2009 5:40 am
This is amazing! and yes, the picture I got was vivid and definitely creepy o.o xDestructive said it!

*votes up!*
Comment by mybeloved: Nov 7, 2009 7:53 pm
=D
Comment by vishnuld: Nov 8, 2009 8:22 pm
simply great .....i love ur imaginary ..relating with nature its awesome
Comment by randeabby08: Nov 9, 2009 10:26 am
i like it. lol
Comment by darkangellover21: Nov 10, 2009 12:30 pm
i really likes the hole dreaming part cuz not every one talks about how thay dreams so vividly.i only wish there was more to it. i love it now but it leaves u wanting more.
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