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Obsidian Heart
How I loathe this obsidian heart
For it's fragile, within it's own design
And by selfish hands, it's torn apart
Simply to reveal what lies inside
After greedy satisfaction is met
The remains are tossed aside
To be sealed over once again
For the next greedy fingers to find
by shyhallow
posted on 12/27/2007
For it's fragile, within it's own design
And by selfish hands, it's torn apart
Simply to reveal what lies inside
After greedy satisfaction is met
The remains are tossed aside
To be sealed over once again
For the next greedy fingers to find
by shyhallow
posted on 12/27/2007
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Comment by footprints: Dec 27, 2007 4:38 pm
Great title! Well written too.Comment by PoemWritingGuy: Dec 27, 2007 6:56 pm
Excellent!Comment by McRluvr: Dec 29, 2007 3:59 pm
ya thats a great poem wow im completely amazed ....... i really like the first line of the second stanza ... great job i voted up
Comment by Bourne: Jan 2, 2008 3:36 pm
nice title, and the last line is really a where you make your mark. nice one shyComment by Thorned: Jan 3, 2008 12:35 pm
o.o
Holy crap. Amazing.
Seriously.
Simple, short, and to the point.
Comment by DeVdoll343: Jan 8, 2008 6:52 pm
awesome awesome awesome shy this is so great. one of my faves from you!Comment by pmaravelias: Jan 9, 2008 9:15 pm
SO GOOD, it melts on the tongue when recited Comment by Syrinx: Feb 1, 2008 12:34 pm
I love this. The emotion is expressed really well, and I like being able to feel what the poet waws feeling. Props!Comment by xxBlackRainbowxx: Jul 13, 2008 2:18 am
OMG this is great.
you are a great writer.