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Never Again Can I Be Hurt

It goes into the skin
Deeper and Deeper the blade goes in
I'm dying slowly, crying loudly
No one seems to care
I can scream and shout but theres no dought
I know no one is there
The emptiness inside me you can admit
It sounds just like cold tin
The dark red blood is starting to soak in
I'm sobbing quietly, dying fast
It's flashing by, it's the past
My life is leaving, borrowed and lent
The souls disapeering, I finally know that its my end

The blood is drained
The blade does fall
It begins to rain
My eyes they close, oh so rapidly

by Sins1Feels
posted on 04/19/2007

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Comment by brokendown: Apr 19, 2007 3:51 pm
wow that is amazing in just 17 lines you made alot of sense and it is really deep if that is what you were going for it is really good i like it good job...!
Comment by VengefulBroxy: Apr 19, 2007 4:01 pm
That's really good...and surprisingly true...I know how u feel if it was a real life experience :]
Comment by razorxbladesxslip: Apr 19, 2007 5:58 pm
this is good.
i think the last line could do without "oh so rapidly"
but otherwise it's really good
Comment by Victimoflove: Apr 20, 2007 6:21 am
This one is very good!!!!!!!!! i like it a lot!
Comment by darckchild: Apr 20, 2007 11:13 am
the last bit kinda messes it up u shudv just put rapidly but its really good
Comment by bloodypaintedart: Apr 16, 2008 11:39 pm
very good
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