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My Suicide

Piece together wood,
to make a beautiful cross.
All decked out with flowers,
like the one at church on Easter.
Except these flowers are dead,
to symbolize what's to come.
Make sure there's a crank to spin it,
(You'll understand by the time the poem is done.)
Then make a crown of thorns,
to place upon your head.
Make sure its good and tight,
you don't want it falling off.
Fasten strong rope or chains,
to where your wrists, feet, and neck will be.
This suicide might need an accomplice,
unless you are smart like me.
Slit both of your wrists,
and make a few incisions in your face.
Pick out a bunch of songs,
and record them onto a tape.
Start playing it on repeat,
and on the note explain each one.
Like for example on mine,
I have the song "Hold On"
And in my note it shall say,
"Hold On"-I cannot any longer.
Then strap yourself to the cross,
and crank it till your upside down.
All the blood will rush to your head,
and fall out through the cuts you made.
It is a slow, probubly painful death,
but that is what I crave.
So I hope you enjoyed My Suicide,
but that you wont do the same.

by gothic666angel6
posted on 02/17/2007

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Comment by SisterofDarkness: Feb 17, 2007 9:43 am
Leiko that is sad!!! do you really feel like that??? It's well written though. Just remember that you have lots of people here for you...
Comment by InMyDreams: Feb 17, 2007 9:58 am
wow.. o.o.. interesting suicide! <3
Comment by chobit99: Feb 17, 2007 10:00 am
HoLy!!!! Thats a really good poem...descriptive too..also a very intersting way...to die...interesting...very interesting...but very painful...well thought!
Comment by gothic666angel6: Feb 17, 2007 10:14 am
sisterofdarkness, i just tried emailing you but your mailbox is full! well dont worry, i want to die this way but not for a long time, i wanna live a happy life first but i wanna die this way cuz it would certainly be remembered for like ever, hehe but thanx for being concerned
Comment by tearsofrain: Feb 17, 2007 10:56 am
wow. i would say poor you, but u probably dont want my sympathy =P cool poem. i lov ethat you can describe your death. im thinking i should do one similar. something about roswes covered in spiderwebs. =) i remember u liked that. but htis is a darkly beautiful poem.
Comment by TheDarkShadow: Feb 17, 2007 11:21 am
ME LIKEY!!!!

AHH!!!!

awesome
Comment by Lordharrison: Feb 17, 2007 3:17 pm
Sad face ooh nooo!! thats soo sad (good, but depressingly sad Flower.
Comment by gothic666angel6: Feb 17, 2007 3:46 pm
why does like everything end in flower? well dont worry i dont plan on doing this anytime soon, it just seems like such a perfect way tho...
Comment by Sinnocence: Feb 19, 2007 1:54 am
VITAL spark of heav'nly flame!
Quit, O quit this mortal frame:
Trembling, hoping, ling'ring, flying,
O the pain, the bliss of dying!
Cease, fond Nature, cease thy strife, 5
And let me languish into life.

Hark! they whisper; angels say,
Sister Spirit, come away!
What is this absorbs me quite?
Steals my senses, shuts my sight, 10
Drowns my spirits, draws my breath?
Tell me, my soul, can this be death?

The world recedes; it disappears!
Heav'n opens on my eyes! my ears
With sounds seraphic ring! 15
Lend, lend your wings! I mount! I fly!
O Grave! where is thy victory?
O Death! where is thy sting?
Comment by Sinnocence: Feb 19, 2007 1:59 am
u knoe ppl hav such a negative outlook on dying...im not here to tell u that life is sometimes worth living leiko. jus that living makes dying so much sweeter.
people are born into this world into many races,of different tougues,in diff circumstances,the rich and the poor,those that are beautiful superficially and those that mould themselves inside.but death isnt like that
Death reunites us all....whatever u are. it dosent care for what u look like,neither does it care for anything u could possibly be during ur entire natural lifetime. we all die the same. black,white,red,yellowblue....we all bleed red
Comment by shadow: Feb 19, 2007 10:44 am
don't kill ur self i would b sad if u did
Comment by gothic666angel6: Feb 19, 2007 12:45 pm
ok im gonna say this plain and simple ok? i wrote a suicide poem, maybe when im way older and done with life i will take it in this way but I DONT PLAN ON KILLING MYSELF!!! its just a poem, a really fun way to die but not for me, i still have a life to look forward to
Comment by shadow: Feb 19, 2007 4:16 pm
woot but still it makes me sad that u came up with something like this but heh i still luv u because ur being urself
Comment by IxDUNNOx: Feb 19, 2007 10:12 pm
THAT IS BEAUTIFUL! omg that is serisously the best poem i have read in a long time, its so good!!!
Comment by PhantomWolfMira: Feb 20, 2007 4:56 pm
really really good! I love it. So much emotion... but you're right, the way they changed it kinda sux. It was so much better b4. Kinda like horseland... +sigh+ oh well.
Comment by NIKKIx: Feb 21, 2007 12:53 pm
good one.....

seriusly. wow.
Comment by aCrazyApe: Feb 22, 2007 9:37 am
I love the way you described everything. A horrible way to die though. Sad. LUV UR POEM!!!(^^)!!!
Comment by xoxlostlovexox: Feb 22, 2007 7:02 pm
dont u hate when people overreact?....i mean its just a poem....a really really good poem, that has tons of emotion in it, and emotion is what makes poems good...rite?....anyways...great poem...i love it!
Comment by bRoKeNhEaRtEd051: Feb 27, 2007 10:55 am
that is a very interesting way to die...painful...probably pretty slow...i love it
Comment by LoveLiesBleeding: Feb 28, 2007 7:45 am
Wow...that's like how St. Peter died...ok no-one wants to know that. Smiley But this is so well written, I love it, although it is really Sad face
Comment by dyinginside: Mar 5, 2007 5:31 am
thats a great way to die.i love it.
Comment by UsedByYou: Mar 9, 2007 11:45 am
the day i'm going to die i'll do that!
Comment by LuciferHasFallen: Mar 13, 2007 5:25 am
COPYRIGHT INFRINGEMENT OF DEATH!!!! XD Hey leiko-mono... sorry I haven't called in a while but our phone is off right now so i'll try to call you on my mom's cell tonight... mreh... I hate the new layouuuuuut... Anyways, love the new poem. You need to write more often.
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