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My Ice coffin

I shiver...

Cold and alone..

My world suddenly seems so small..

So cold...

I peer out..

Of the world i'm in..

As i start to freeze, i see the happy faces of those outside

I feel the envy..The hatred..

Jealousy...

Just a few of my sins..

But unlike the other sinners

There shall be no repentence

Soon i shall go to a warmer place

Of unspeakable torments

I lick my lips in anticipation...

o my...

Fire....

by AFireInYourEyes18
posted on 05/06/2008

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Comment by duhdude18: May 6, 2008 8:48 pm
you get it. keep it up
Comment by drkromance: May 6, 2008 2:05 pm
Simply amazing
Comment by HeartlessShadow: May 6, 2008 8:22 am
WOW that was awesome
good job!
Comment by stargirl09: May 6, 2008 7:30 am
wow good poem
Comment by Breathexxforxxme: May 6, 2008 7:53 am
yeah.. brilliant.
Comment by AFireInYourEyes18: May 7, 2008 5:55 am
thnx guys.... its good to know i've so much support
Comment by Darryn732: May 6, 2008 10:02 am
brilliant poem Smiley
Comment by HeartlessAngel: May 6, 2008 9:52 am
wonderful poem...you are quite a poet.
Comment by brokentwice: May 7, 2008 8:09 am
so sweet nd nice..keep it up
Comment by MonsterBabies: May 7, 2008 9:39 am
Hehe nice
Comment by Freewriter91: Jun 9, 2008 12:22 pm
outstandin~!
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