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My First Quote-

When the time comes that i pass away,
I don't want to be known as the person that died,
But as the girl that died more and more everyday.

by aqua4ever
posted on 04/04/2008

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Comment by BriiXx3: Apr 4, 2008 4:45 pm
short, but good =]
Comment by darkartisticgurl: Apr 4, 2008 9:03 pm
horribly depressing for just 3 short lines. but it really is good.
Comment by loveme77: Apr 5, 2008 11:23 am
Awwww, that's so sad!
But I'd like to be remembered for that reason also.
It's horrible that no one really takes the time anymore to realize what you're feeling. I hope that's not the case for you (it is for me). Great Quote!
Comment by MonsterBabies: Apr 5, 2008 2:26 pm
..I really like it..
Comment by nickson104: Apr 7, 2008 10:22 am
i agree with darkaristicgurl....
to be honest i was expecting something more uplifting, you have such a beautiful character and personality and i dont see you as this... you will be happy and will achieve great things one day, i know it... just you hold on and wait and see
Comment by nickson104: Apr 7, 2008 10:23 am
i forgot to say.... its brilliantly well written and it definitely gets my vote up
Comment by bking84: Apr 7, 2008 11:49 am
what does it mean to die more everyday?
Comment by sorrowfulsoul: Apr 7, 2008 1:20 pm
sad, short, and stupendous!
Comment by sdp92895: Apr 7, 2008 4:24 pm
wow nice
Comment by dark1angel2: Apr 10, 2008 7:48 am
i love that quote mine is soo cheesy but at least mine is heartfelt!
Comment by watelse2say: Apr 16, 2008 7:56 am
hmmmmm?
Comment by deadlyinluv24: Apr 23, 2008 10:32 am
interesting thats a big word
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