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My Demon

My demon inside
For years took control,
Raging within,
I played no role.

Consuming all,
and gave no hope,
Toyed with me,
Offered me a noosed rope.

No more I say,
I will fight for life,
To turn the demon,
Wash back the strife.

I yearn for happiness
and a reason to live,
My demon within
Will finally give.

I will use it's strength,
To turn the tide,
Despair no more,
No longer hide.

The fire burns,
The passion sparks,
The soul in flames
The glorious dark.

The demon lives,
But not to take,
A demon of strength
Is finally awake.

by Cerberus
posted on 04/16/2008

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Comment by MechanicalAnimal: Apr 20, 2008 12:32 pm
Great, great poem.
Comment by foreverendeavor1790: Apr 16, 2008 9:02 am
wow!! this is really good!!
Comment by meltedsnowman: Apr 16, 2008 9:19 am
amazing...
Comment by kayla: Apr 16, 2008 1:05 pm
This is a fantasic poem...sounds like a powerful place to beSmiley
Comment by kayla: Apr 16, 2008 1:06 pm
Oops! fantastic!
Comment by LostInside: Apr 16, 2008 1:35 pm
wow. that is an amazing poem. very powerful. i wish i was able to over come my iner demons
Comment by emogothjen: Apr 17, 2008 12:30 pm
dang that is seriously good!
Comment by Rouge: Apr 17, 2008 1:07 pm
This speaks to me, what a great write XD
Comment by Cerberus: Apr 17, 2008 2:16 pm
Thanks all Smiley
Comment by anonymous: Apr 17, 2008 10:03 pm
this is an amazing poem. It's really strong and straightforward. I love it.
Comment by Blazen: Apr 18, 2008 4:32 pm
Hunnie this fantastic, i love it and i really hope it works, and u know im always here for u, n if u fall ill be right there to pick u bk up xxx
Comment by SPAGACKULA: Apr 20, 2008 2:31 am
That's tells it like it is
That can be applied to anyone's demon's
Comment by SLAYER101: Apr 25, 2008 6:07 am
Nice one. Demon within, giving strength and all that shit. just awsome man. Awsome
Comment by childOFtheNIGHT: Apr 27, 2008 6:27 pm
reallyy good i love the way its set out and the way it just flows
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