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my best friend

the melancholy melodies drift through the night
the pain is like a ball of fire
exploding in her heart
no more tears
no more fears
only empty lies, words, sighs
only jealousy, rage, defeat
only sadness, pain, despair
her eyes have become shells of enigmic blue
no more smiling
only blank
no more beating
no more living
bury her deep
she's already dead
torn form anything she ever loved
no more tears
no more fears
only emptyness
last breath escapes the dull lips
enigmic blue eyes closed
no more is she
at least, not in this world...
heaven is where she finally lifts her wings,
sheds her pain,
and smiles....


dedicated to Sarah

by bloodyrose
posted on 05/12/2008

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Comment by TaintedThorn: May 12, 2008 5:32 pm
awww....i am sorry for your lost...amazing poem...
Comment by zoe: May 12, 2008 6:27 pm
Sorry about lossing her I bet it hurts to think about it........Great poem.
Comment by fade: May 13, 2008 5:37 am
Geez, i am so sorry. This is going to sound weird...but i've been so close to suicide before. Put my best friends through hell. Thank you for giving me a bit of insight on what it would have done to the people who love me if i had taken my life. I'm not in that place anymore, and I'm doing well. Still...VERY GOOD poem!!!!!! I love it!
Comment by rosesANDletters: May 14, 2008 3:32 pm
wow... my current boyfriend was close... last year...but he's better now and i'm glad. =]
Comment by deadlyinluv24: May 14, 2008 6:34 pm
dang this must have been hard to write without sheding ur tears of sorrow.i hope u r ok. n im very sorry bout ur friend i guess she is in a better place. nice poem thogh thats a plus n a minus.
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