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murky water

the murky water
is a welcome sight
the muddy bottom
swallows me down
struggling to gain my breath
a struggle i lose
deeper i am pulled under
i stop struggling

calm murky waters
dont show its true power
waiting for its next victim
any soul will do
it took mine without
second thought

and will take again ........

by skammaj
posted on 03/10/2008

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Comment by foreverendeavor1790: Mar 10, 2008 6:49 am
awsome!
Comment by BrokenHeartsTornUpLetters: Mar 10, 2008 7:14 am
deep...
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