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Multicoloured Grey

Murals, murals, mysterious and tall,
Taking up miles and miles of wall,
Stretched along cerebral static,
Optic nerves are so ecstatic.

Murals, murals, everywhere,
Cannot help but stop and stare,
At every brush stroke of desperation,
Every drop of paint a condemnation.

Life sentence so it would seem,
Of painting in grey and dreaming in green,
Of dancing in black and dreaming of blue,
Does that sound a little strange to you?

Sweet life, capturing breathlesness,
A life devoid will soon depress,
Staring along this endless wall,
Wondering how to make it fall.

Murals, murals, rainbow colours,
Wondering if there are others,
Just like me who paint in grey,
But dream of colours everyday.

by beautifuldisaster
posted on 06/29/2009

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Comment by kendaray: Jun 30, 2009 7:42 pm
Beautiful Smiley it's a poem people can really relate to once they get the meaning Smiley
Comment by ElectricNight047: Jun 30, 2009 2:02 pm
That was reeeally good! OMG!
Comment by beautifuldisaster: Jun 30, 2009 10:25 am
thanks Smiley
Comment by darknessofcrows: Jun 29, 2009 10:42 pm
I love this! The imagery is superb. And...well, it rocks. It sounds alot like my thoughts over the years, so, yeah, I love it. Vote up.(smile)
Comment by xJeskaDollx: Jun 30, 2009 6:03 pm
Third stanza=love (:
Comment by patto27: Jul 1, 2009 2:22 am
its nice i like it aye
keep writing
Comment by draydanljr: Jul 2, 2009 5:26 am
like it keep at it
Comment by wastedhope: Jul 3, 2009 9:46 am
Has a great meaning, keep on writing. =]
Comment by scaryslut: Jul 17, 2009 2:27 pm
wow. love how you speak of dreams in color but reality in gray. interesting take, but i think i get it.
Comment by prettyspl: Aug 25, 2009 1:17 am
Very interesting poem .. I loved it! It says so much .. and in colours! : ) Great job ...
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