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I open my eyes
And what do I see
A girl standing there
Smiling at me

She holds up her hand
And in it a blade
Places it to her arm
And slices away

As the blood runs down
So do the tears
Yet she smiles and says
"I really don't care"

"Why should I feel
Any pain and despair
When the people I loved
Didn't show that they cared."

As I realize who it is
My heart skips a beat
Cause the girl that I see
Is actually me

by HeartlessAngel
posted on 04/02/2008

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Comment by BEAUTIFULPHATMAMA: Jul 1, 2008 9:18 pm
Nice poem
Comment by lbrnware: May 6, 2008 2:27 pm
Hey Gurlie,
The poem is great but you should totally not be the subject, you know that everyone on the site luvs u and u can talk to anyone of us.

Reassuring,
lbrnware
Comment by Darryn732: May 6, 2008 4:18 pm
excellent poet Smiley
Comment by tobeloved: May 4, 2008 3:33 pm
aww that's really sad.. you're such a good poem writer (lol lack of other word =P) excellent job!
Comment by friendZdogZ: Apr 2, 2008 1:21 pm
aw man u wrote a poem about that? dude that sucks - not th poem it's cool but wat it's about isn't.
u know i think the girl in the mirror should do? she should slice and dice the punks that didn't care.
oh and btw, dude i care Open smile
Comment by friendZdogZ: Apr 2, 2008 1:31 pm
hey i'm sorry, ok. i didn't mean to be so negative, i should have been more supportive like.
Comment by LostInside: Apr 2, 2008 1:44 pm
wow that was really good
Comment by souloffire89: Apr 2, 2008 6:15 pm
yeah that was really good

Comment by dareyourself: Apr 3, 2008 6:10 am
Really good poem, but if what you're writing is really happeing, I think you should talk to someone and get some help. Stop hurting yourself! But very very good poem.
Comment by 18girl101: Apr 3, 2008 11:19 am
nice poem
Comment by BloodLustingElf: Apr 3, 2008 3:42 pm
Love it Ls, so demented and you. But If I find anything on your body I swear you will be Dead meat!!!!!! Love ya Smiley
Comment by controlthedemon: Apr 3, 2008 4:21 pm
wow
i know exactly how you feel
it'll get better hun, have faith
keep writing your great at it
Comment by fallenangel6636: Apr 4, 2008 7:30 am
holy shit girl, that is such a good poem, keep on writing! send some into a poetry contest and i bet you will win!
Comment by MechanicalAnimal: Apr 4, 2008 8:47 am
Good poem but I hope it's not true to life.
Comment by hiddeninblood: Apr 4, 2008 9:32 am
i agree with everyone...really good poem....just hope you feel better...SmileySmiley
Comment by Chrisha8788: Apr 6, 2008 12:05 am
that poem reminds me of the one i wrote awhile ago called Too Late..
Comment by EmoBabyGurL: Apr 6, 2008 12:41 am
Aww....thast sad.
I love the poem tho. good job.!
Comment by writingmysoulsdiary: Apr 8, 2008 9:25 am
hey, I'm right where you are hun, and i know how even though a million people tell you to stop, you can't. If you haven't talked to people do it though, because even though it sounds terrifying, you need t, because it will be so worth it after. Don't let yourself get to a point where you're about to go farther than you should-realize there's a reason you're alive. Even if it's the smallest reason (ie someone reading your poem and not feeling so alone), there's a reason hun, and life will get better. Trust me, I'm living proof.
Comment by meltedsnowman: Apr 8, 2008 10:08 am
agree with writingmysoulsdiary...im there too..its way too hard to stop.. im sorry you have to go through this though..
Comment by kartracergurl14: Apr 9, 2008 4:15 pm
I know how you feel i have been there and i have poems that i have that say something along those lines.
Comment by dark1angel2: Apr 10, 2008 7:49 am
wow i actually had felt that pain so strong as it washes away!
Comment by HeartlessAngel: Apr 29, 2008 11:33 am
Thank you....all of you....it means alot....
Comment by Monika1: Apr 25, 2008 7:48 am
Good
Comment by AshFlowers: Apr 25, 2008 3:45 pm
I understand this, I have the same emotions and feelings, but if it bothers you more than you would like, I would love to talk to you.
Comment by asdfyz: Apr 27, 2008 5:14 pm
I hope that this habit has stopped. I feel like that alot but I use other methods to cope. (try rubber bands or hair ties, they are a little less bloody and painful but they get the job done). Also beautiful poem. Didn't expec tthe ending
Comment by foreverendeavor1790: Apr 29, 2008 9:28 am
yeah umm... i do care and if ever ther has been a time where i was rude or in the future if i am i am really sorry.. that is the type of person that i am not at all.. but you know a mistake is a mistake and if ever i am i am really sorry ok... but truely honestly i really do care so please' please do not be mistaken ok... if ever you need to talk to somebody i am always here... if i am not on leave a messege and i will write back asap ok

i liked this poem because it had shown alot of emotion and it let all of us know how you feel so for those of us who do care we can be there for you if only... if only you let us in..
Comment by BrokenHeartsTornUpLetters: Apr 29, 2008 3:28 pm
i do actaully really like this poem...the way it rhymes and flows..i culd never write like that soo really good job Smiley
Comment by SPAGACKULA: May 1, 2008 4:17 am
I like your style,But there's nothing good about cutting,----
--When you get to the point of where Others people's pain
feels good ,instead of your own ,You will feel better about yourself.
Comment by zoe: May 17, 2008 5:46 pm
LOVE YOURE WRITING I WROGHT A POEM CALLED <CUTS> THOW IM NOT VEREY GOOD! U SHOULD READ IT SOMETIME THAT IS IF U WANT 2..........I WOULD LOVE TO GET 2 KNOW U BUT THAT IS ALL UP 2 U GREAT POEM......
Comment by emilymaria: Jul 11, 2008 3:56 am
i love your work and style or writing but if you are actuallt cutting yourself
i think you need to talk to someone.
Comment by AshleyDawn: Jul 17, 2008 4:10 pm
wow i love this poem but if you really are cutting yourself then you ...well i dont know exactly but you shouldnt!!!but anyways i really do love the poem!!!
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