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Lost Soul

She covers her mouth
Pulls her hand away from the key board, grasping for peace of mind

She can't find it
Her head isnt screwed on right, she's to far gone

Her writing has dissapeared
She doesnt think she can feel

Her heart is shattered
She has no where to go

No where to hide
No where to scream
No where to cry

No one to hide from
No one to scream at
No one to cry to

No feelings to hide away
No feelings to scream out
No feelings to cry about

Just one big empty shell
With one big empty heart
And one big soul

That happens to be lost

by mylifeasacutter
posted on 09/24/2009

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Comment by flippinthrulife17: Sep 24, 2009 10:41 pm
o.o

...I haven't figured out if feeling total emptiness is worse than being filled with pain...

but this says
it is...and...its so

devastating, hun
Comment by Crushed: Sep 25, 2009 3:25 am
But, she writes beautfil poetry.

Good Work!
Comment by Crushed: Sep 25, 2009 3:26 am
*beautfil
Comment by Crushed: Sep 25, 2009 3:27 am
*Beautiful, there I spelt it correctly. Sorry, for the comments.
Comment by infidel: Sep 27, 2009 8:02 am
well i figure as long as you keep writing beautiful poems like this. you must have some feelings left deep down and you show it with every poem you write. im glad you write what you do every time. great job its awesome. ily always
Comment by xochitlisasian: Oct 21, 2009 2:33 pm
the feeling of emptiness i have to say, is far worse than being filled with pain.
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