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Listen to me

We all have our problems we all surffer pain
Were all confussed about our own age
But i have a big problem its that no one cares
No one asks me how my day is or how im feeling
Everyone tells me their promblems expecting me to help but no one gives a damn
If i need help no ones there they all seem to go
At the moment im loosing two people i love the most
But no one listens to my pleeas
No one can tell when my lifes just a big tease
So im going back to the closest comfort i can get
Im getting my blade and making my arm wet
Dont give a damn i dont care
Tell me your problems your sure i can fix
Then when i finlly get the courge to finish the deed
My death will be yours my problems left in the air

by BrokenHeartsTornUpLetters
posted on 05/13/2008

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Comment by HeartlessAngel: May 15, 2008 7:40 am
I care about you. I ask how you're feeling and I ask how you're day is too. I wouldn't ask if I didn't care about you sweetie.
Comment by dyinginside52: May 13, 2008 10:05 am
this is a really great poem i love it.
Comment by AFireInYourEyes18: May 13, 2008 12:56 pm
if i could slap you i would... there are people here who care bout your problems
Comment by writingmysoulsdiary: May 16, 2008 9:22 am
hey- i can definitely relate to this. i've been there when it felt like no one cared and it was like it didn't matter if i lived or died. and it brought me to do some pretty scary and bad, really bad things.then when i had the scars on my wrist and the three empty bottles on my bed, i realized what i had done. i called the person i thought of and just cried. it was then that i realized what a selfish thing it was for me to do, and how i was breaking the hearts of eople who cared more about me than id ever know. the feeling yuo have of desolution right is depression lying to you. it gets in your head and tells yu things and makes you believes things about yourself that aren't true. just remember that there's a life worth living, yuo just have to be patient and brave enough to live it. otherwise you're giving up on yuorself, and proving rigt anyone who makes you believe you're not good enough.

sorry this is such a long comment, i just have been there and could tell you neded to hear that.
message me anytime you need to.
Comment by vampireheart: May 17, 2008 5:06 pm
i can definatly relate,
its the same with me

but its a great poem!
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