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Ligature Marks

Wandering this life
A very dark stroll
Ligature marks
Upon my soul

Strangulating
By these memories of mine
Nothing is sacred
Nothing's divine

Day after day
Slowly I choke
Sullen thoughts
They do provoke

An unseen garrote
That winds and winds
An unseen cord
That binds and binds

Prolonged asphyxiation
Is taking its toll
Ligature marks
Upon my soul

by lostinpoetry
posted on 11/01/2009

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Comment by mybeloved: Nov 2, 2009 4:48 pm
very deep my friend. good job
Comment by Nex: Nov 2, 2009 6:51 pm
Very interesting rhyme scheme. This piece has a nice rhythm to it.
I like the repetition of "Ligature marks, upon my soul". It kinda sounds like a twisted lullaby.
Very nice, indeed. (:
Comment by nina777: Nov 3, 2009 1:40 pm
nice poem i like it
Comment by CrAzYsTaR: Jan 19, 2010 8:43 am
lighture marks,upon my soul
ummm
not understanding it lol
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