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Issues against the world

Endless fading or your dark silhouette
Trying to remember, yet to forget
Read the news about a war taking lives
You turn to see the stock market taking dives
So tired of a plastic, money painted worlds
While you smile at riches and count your pearls
Your greed hid with deceiving little smiles
your anorexic wannbe hid with style
Walking in stiletto black heels
Trading your life for drug deals
Sipping away years with alcohol
You get high and then you will fall
Yeah, life is something so easy to spend
Cutting off breath to fit life's latest trend
Spitting blood, and starving yourself
To turn your image into something else
buying and selling bodies in one night stands
giving no thought to life's reprimands
money,lust,glory, and fame
all become a double edged flame
Just paint on you fake plastic smile
Your bloody hands oh so vile
some one dies, shed crocodile tears
and pretend there is nothing to fear
So go ahead waste you life
Remember lust forget the strife
so go ahead and just forget
but one day soon you will regret




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Okay I haven't written in awhile, I am trying a new style tell me what you think.

by Darkdaydreamer
posted on 09/12/2009

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Comments: 26
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Comment by Darkdaydreamer: Sep 20, 2009 3:29 pm
Hey I can't spell, I mean I just can!
Comment by Darkdaydreamer: Sep 20, 2009 3:29 pm
I mean Can't! see that how horrible I am.
Comment by LunaGetsuna: Sep 13, 2009 7:21 pm
Damn! You are doing so well as a blossoming writer; keep it up, Lizzy! Nice style change! Open smile
Comment by RhymeWithSuicide: Sep 12, 2009 11:45 pm
this is sort of a inyourface poem, i like the rhyming. i like the concept of it and i must say i agree.
Comment by jblak4: Sep 14, 2009 12:54 pm
i like the rhythm of the poem,, good job =))
Comment by deathsmessanger: Sep 15, 2009 9:33 am
:] i lovelovelove this poem, keep on writing!!
Comment by animefangirl4ever: Sep 15, 2009 4:59 pm
Horrible, everyone writes about this stuff, not original, 0/0

*votes down
Comment by danielvan99: Sep 17, 2009 7:52 pm
as stated above, nice ryhmes! Finding the right ryhmes is so hard to produce but you were able to do so. Keep up the good work.
Comment by nessa123412: Sep 18, 2009 1:40 pm
the rhymes in your poem are great
Comment by PrettyOdd: Sep 18, 2009 3:27 pm
Ugh. That little fangirl annoys me.
Anyway...
I thought the poem was pretty interesting. There are some errors with grammar and punctuation, so I'd look out for things like that.
Keep writing.
Comment by DanielJacquesCain: Sep 20, 2009 3:40 pm
I like it. It's outspoken and fast. To me it paints New York but it could so easily be any other major city, which is a Sad face but true
Comment by animefangirl4ever: Sep 20, 2009 3:31 pm
Got a problem with me PrettyOdd?
Comment by fanpirewerevocate: Sep 27, 2009 5:57 pm
It has awesome rhythm
Ignore the fangirl, what does she know?

(besides how to draw anime)
Comment by Darkhawk: Oct 4, 2009 8:33 pm
Nice Darkdaydreamer, great style and dark poetry. Really like it, but have to say I liked your old style more.
Comment by Psychobabble: Oct 5, 2009 9:02 am
I like it, it rhymes very well.
Comment by dyingroselost15: Oct 12, 2009 6:44 pm
amazing. I really like this one.You are an amzing writer.
Comment by Freewriter91: Oct 13, 2009 9:34 am
Very well done Smiley
Comment by bleonard27: Oct 18, 2009 10:02 am
good job
Comment by dyingroselost15: Oct 22, 2009 7:40 pm
i enjoyed reading this. perfectly dark. i crave more!
Comment by SweetTea: Oct 27, 2009 7:16 am
This is awesome!!! I love dark poetry
Comment by rayne482: Oct 27, 2009 6:37 pm
I love it. Very well written, love the style, it fits perfectly.
Comment by Throughwithlove14: Oct 28, 2009 8:51 am
That was totally great!! And no probs with the spelling thing. Im not all that great either;]
Comment by ccampion: Oct 30, 2009 5:36 pm
The state of the nation in poetry.
Comment by mybeloved: Nov 2, 2009 6:51 pm
this is really really really good. i love this!
Comment by Joshman: Nov 5, 2009 9:49 pm
I like this poem.....
Dark...
Comment by deathmonkey: Nov 20, 2009 2:31 pm
This is good; quite true, as well...
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