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if i were a knife...
destined by fate
to slide across
and gain another loss
i'm the same one
she held on her wrists
that same night
i'd take her life
though because of me
she'll never see a tomorrow
because of me
there's an end to her sorrow.
by CassidyEarly
posted on 11/05/2007
to slide across
and gain another loss
i'm the same one
she held on her wrists
that same night
i'd take her life
though because of me
she'll never see a tomorrow
because of me
there's an end to her sorrow.
by CassidyEarly
posted on 11/05/2007
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Comment by deadrose37: Jun 21, 2008 10:06 pm
I love it when people think of things from the other end. Instead of the cutter, your cutting. If that were to make sense to anyone in the world. 
Comment by childOFtheNIGHT: Nov 6, 2007 4:40 am
omgg i love itttttComment by unknown: Nov 6, 2007 6:51 am
this is really sad and scary,good poem.Comment by unknowntruth1: Nov 6, 2007 2:07 pm
wow this is so good.. NICE JOB!!!
Comment by funkyninja898: Nov 8, 2007 2:49 pm
great poem, very nice job.Comment by HeckYes: Nov 8, 2007 7:39 pm
This is really sad, somewhat morbid, but I absolutely love it. You really have some talent here. Great work!
~All you need is love
Comment by Morticia: Nov 14, 2007 11:37 am
deep dark dooming... my kinda poem its short and sharp! keep it up!Comment by scarredemotions17: Nov 16, 2007 6:29 am
man.. i am sorry i love the poem just wish it wasn't so sad and about suicide. i shallpray for u or whom ever it may of been about. eben if it is just how u feel i will pray.Comment by CassidyEarly: Nov 19, 2007 7:02 pm
woah. thanks for the comments guys.
and thanks for the prayers ^^
always help :]
Comment by romantichomicide: Dec 1, 2007 2:40 am
slow down look back theres alot you've lacked to see, Even if you didn't find the key, To unlock all the things you culd be,Comment by CassidyEarly: Dec 5, 2007 5:16 am
hhaha. love the responsive verse/comment :]Comment by christi823: Jan 15, 2008 9:40 am
I love this. Deep. Emotional. Lovely. </3Comment by HeartlessAngel: Jan 16, 2008 1:55 pm
i love this poem! really great poem!Comment by altheamaraj: Aug 9, 2008 11:26 am
you scared me with awe...
thats very good one opp of salvation, yet same...
very good one