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i died
i did, i died, yet still survived
not realy dead, not realy alive
i lived a lie, and died so slow
finding the truth i didn't know
i laughed, i cried,and was born to die
gone and lost , not knowing why
by sajinn
posted on 05/05/2008
not realy dead, not realy alive
i lived a lie, and died so slow
finding the truth i didn't know
i laughed, i cried,and was born to die
gone and lost , not knowing why
by sajinn
posted on 05/05/2008
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Comment by ltina33: Jun 10, 2008 5:24 am
heyy not bad. i like itComment by sajinn: May 6, 2008 2:01 pm
hey bumkid no one asked you its a poem !get over it!Comment by bumkid: May 6, 2008 9:28 am
you know man this poem is super gay ok man like dont even try and lie and say your dead cuz if you were then you wouldnt be able to be writing poems you dumb kid learn to not lie Comment by HeartlessAngel: May 6, 2008 9:40 am
Awesome poem!Comment by Holychild: May 5, 2008 7:58 pm
this is extravagant! I give it a vote up.
keep them coming. God bless you. Love&Peace:]
Comment by Waterblaze3234: May 6, 2008 6:55 am
its that the truth great poem!Comment by AngelicallyBroken: May 5, 2008 4:23 pm
reeeally good!Comment by deadinside212: May 5, 2008 3:28 pm
i love this....and i understand what ur sayingComment by MechanicalAnimal: May 5, 2008 1:45 pm
Very good. Flows excellently.Comment by PrettyOdd: May 5, 2008 5:42 pm
Nice job. I like it. It works really well.Comment by Darryn732: May 6, 2008 12:30 am
Great poem 
Comment by coldfire146: May 5, 2008 12:39 pm
i love this poem it is really great. i like how it all just flows together Comment by cryingblackblood: May 5, 2008 12:47 pm
in all the confuison it makes senseComment by unknown: May 6, 2008 10:15 am
very good,i love it.Comment by lifesucks: May 7, 2008 10:34 am
that is about life and it is a good poem Comment by scarsofsecrets: May 7, 2008 8:02 pm
i love the poem Comment by bumkid: May 8, 2008 12:27 pm
ok no one asked me i understand that but critisism is a key thing in success buddy which you aint gonna have none of Comment by sajinn: May 8, 2008 2:07 pm
yes but you didnt have to call me a dumb kid....kinda hurt my feelings...you know?Comment by lindseymarie: May 9, 2008 11:08 am
i like this poem...i doComment by TormentedMaiden101: May 14, 2008 7:26 am
hey this is a really good poem !! i liked it !!Comment by deadlyinluv24: May 15, 2008 10:49 am
awsome i love it. nice poemComment by UnsafeSanctuary: May 17, 2008 11:49 am
There's no clear subject, except "I died" which is repetitive and flat, it feels like you didn't even think through what you wanted to say, or maybe I'm just blind to it... also putting contradictory lines in this is getting you no where fast...work on itComment by zoe: May 27, 2008 5:55 pm
well i for 1 think its perfict the way it is great poem......Comment by huzi8t9: Jun 10, 2008 10:10 pm
Great poem. Bumkid, wise up mate. A poem is to express feelings, maybe Sajinn is dead inside? ;) Emoticons.. you fool, wake up --- vote up Comment by AshleyDawn: Jul 17, 2008 5:06 pm
wow i really can relate its a really good poem