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I am Two
I am two things
I am myself
but also something darker
Something else
It feeds on the failures
It feeds on the sadness
It will accept you
and be critical of you
Something Dark and shadowed
A faceless being that will kill you
As much as befriend you
For I am two
I am myself
but I'm something else
Something merciless
Something so supremely intelligent
That it knows nothing
Something Mature in its hypocrisy
Both Are one
Because I am two
I am myself
and all of You
by darksideofme
posted on 10/21/2009
I am myself
but also something darker
Something else
It feeds on the failures
It feeds on the sadness
It will accept you
and be critical of you
Something Dark and shadowed
A faceless being that will kill you
As much as befriend you
For I am two
I am myself
but I'm something else
Something merciless
Something so supremely intelligent
That it knows nothing
Something Mature in its hypocrisy
Both Are one
Because I am two
I am myself
and all of You
by darksideofme
posted on 10/21/2009
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Comment by UmbraMonumentum: Nov 15, 2009 10:27 am
There is not one human being on earth who cannot relate to this. Well done!!Comment by grunty: Oct 21, 2009 2:38 pm
Duality man, it can knock you down, but at least it sticks around long enough to pick you up.
"Both Are one
Because I am two
I am myself
and all of You"
Nice finish!
Comment by Heartbroken120: Oct 21, 2009 2:38 pm
i really like this darksideofme.
this is a very interesting poem. i like the way you did the structure. very good.
Comment by monkeyboy2416: Oct 21, 2009 2:49 pm
Something so supremely intelligent
That it knows nothing
Something Mature in its hypocrisy
Please don't describe me in your poetry, you'll make me blush.
Seriously though, that's great.
Comment by SilentWords: Oct 21, 2009 3:11 pm
LoL Monkey!
Both Are one
Because I am two
I am myself
and all of You
This was a great poem, and the ending, well it was perfect.
Comment by nothingisimpossible: Oct 21, 2009 4:32 pm
What awesome piece!! It is very touching and truly I didn't expect the end! Really great thought! All the best man
Keeeep Writing your wonderful poetryComment by OasisInMyMind: Oct 21, 2009 5:53 pm
woah... nice poem. that was seriously awesome, and so very true.Comment by ellipsis: Oct 21, 2009 8:41 pm
you may be even more than two...Comment by mcgeorge40: Oct 21, 2009 10:34 pm
love it. i'm a gemini also.Comment by Xenoz: Oct 21, 2009 10:55 pm
AWESOME. 'nuff said.Comment by false: Oct 22, 2009 1:27 pm
so you are two darkside...!!
but for me, i'm more than two... countless, i'm! you made me try to count how many i am! great!
Comment by false: Oct 22, 2009 1:28 pm
the end was a shock!Comment by false: Oct 22, 2009 1:29 pm
a wonderful shock!Comment by PrettyOdd: Oct 22, 2009 8:19 pm
Something so supremely intelligent
That it knows nothing
Something Mature in its hypocrisy
I thought that was pretty frickin' awesome.
Something Mature in its hypocrisy... Man, that's good. So good I had to quote it twice. I don't think I've ever done that before...
Comment by lalala: Nov 2, 2009 3:44 pm
LOVE the ending! Comment by funkyninja898: Nov 29, 2009 5:50 pm
dude, wicked relatable to everyone. great job on that part and i really like the endingComment by friendZdogZ: Dec 9, 2009 7:43 pm
best poem yet mike, best poem yet Comment by BeautyFromPain7: Feb 9, 2010 3:14 pm
Simply brilliant!
"Something so supremely intelligent
That it knows nothing
Something Mature in its hypocrisy
Both Are one
Because I am two
I am myself
and all of You"
Simply amazing finish
i love your writing so much
it always feels so relatable
and hits me differently
thank you for posting
i enjoy reading your work