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I Am Sorry.

Silent screams originating from a mute voice.
Inaudible yelling inside a cracking glass house,
Violently echoing back and forth with an
Octave strong enough to shatter the foundation.

Blasphemies bitterly shouted,
Completely inaudible to all but one.
Yet the tension it creates offends
The person they were intending to scold.

Silence only intensifies the voiceless shouting.
Turning up the heat to a boiling pot of emotions.
Pushing it to the brink of overflowing and ensuring
Someone outside of it will get burned.

The absence of a particular string of words
Is causing this intangible argument,
Making it even harder to accept the
Notion at face value.
And creating even more reasons for the sentence…
“I am sorry”.




-JoeV-

by JoeV
posted on 07/10/2009

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Comment by alostsoul: Jul 10, 2009 11:50 pm
Wow............. u are truly amazing, this is all I can say about this poem.
Comment by WinstonRiley: Jul 11, 2009 10:25 am
would change sentence to scream, so And creating even more reasons for the scream...
I am sorry. It picks up the theme of shout from the first two stanzas
Comment by JoeV: Jul 11, 2009 5:33 pm
Thank you alostsoul, it means a lot.
Comment by JoeV: Jul 11, 2009 5:34 pm
I appreciate your input winstonriley, but I like it the way it is. Thanks for reading.
Comment by itsme0405: Jul 12, 2009 10:15 pm
yet another great poem, joe.
and i agree, i like it the way it is.
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