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Hummnig to Whistling

There she was,
humming a tuneless song.
The backround is fuzz,
Something is wrong.

She doesn't wanna go on,
to the ground she falls.
She's on her lawn,
she breathes then bawls.

Her life is a mess,
but she tried her best,
torn lacy dress,
this is part of her test.

A bird comes along,
but does not bother,
He whistles his song,
She starts back like a toddler.

There she was,
whistling his song.
Gone is the fuzz,
she will move on.


Niki Lu Voie

by NikisNightmare
posted on 11/03/2009

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Comment by Healer: Nov 3, 2009 11:03 am
wooow! daang i like this poem. deep!! dang great job! keep it up!
Comment by mybeloved: Nov 3, 2009 11:30 am
awesome poem, i love it.
Comment by nina777: Nov 3, 2009 1:28 pm
nice poem i like it
Comment by FreeFalling: Nov 3, 2009 1:31 pm
|Her life is a mess,
but she tried her best,
torn lacy dress,
this is part of her test.|
Absolutely love it
Comment by cuttingboard: Nov 3, 2009 4:52 pm
finnaly she is back to moving on, great poem
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