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Hope

I make myself a noose of despair
as I stand on this chair made of hope;
I fix the noose around my neck
and pull taut on the rope.

As I kick hope away, despair grabs my throat
causing my neck to give;
Because without hope, despair always wins
killing the spirit to live.

by secretpoet
posted on 07/11/2007

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Comment by Findingyou: Jul 11, 2007 9:32 am
i like this one..its really good!
Comment by NeotericDawn: Jul 11, 2007 9:47 am
Amazing!
Nice imagery.
I like it.
=]
Comment by missingmom: Jul 11, 2007 9:58 am
Great! You need to change your pen-name, it's no longer a secret that you're a poet, and a really good one at that! Smiley
Comment by VengefulBroxy: Jul 11, 2007 9:58 am
This is really awesome.So true.
***Broxy
Comment by kayla: Jul 11, 2007 1:30 pm
great againSmiley
Comment by Itami: Jul 11, 2007 3:34 pm
From someone who writes a lot of dark, shadowy poetry...i like it.
Comment by footprints: Jul 11, 2007 8:34 pm
Great one again.. Always a pleasure to read your work.
Comment by MsKeys1707: Jul 31, 2007 11:01 am
wow the words in this is soo deep so piowerful and soo true
V ery well written
I really love thisSmiley
Comment by friendZdogZ: Aug 5, 2007 11:42 am
wow deep
i never really thought about it like that, "Because without hope, despair always wins"
great! Open smile
Comment by emptywoman0725: Sep 23, 2007 11:51 pm
how i really wish i could be like you... you really have deep thughts!
ILOVE THIS PIECE!

Comment by HeartlessAngel: Nov 28, 2007 9:10 am
that's cool.
Comment by brockendreams: Dec 5, 2007 9:23 am
i love your poem my favorite part was, "Because without hope, despair always wins
killing the spirit to live."
Comment by harvestoflight: Dec 11, 2007 10:11 pm
sometimes, hope itself feels like a timeless, pointless execution,i think...very good..shhh..it's secret!lol





harvestoflight
Comment by tobeloved: Mar 4, 2008 5:07 pm
very good.
Comment by apollocrunk: Jul 27, 2008 2:59 pm
darn youre good
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