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Help Me

I try so hard
but I'm always wrong
I need someone
to help me along
This journey is difficult
These roads are paved
with cracks and faults
I need to be saved
from this dead end
the cuts my life short
and from this earth
I need to deport
cause it feels like my heart
is empty and hollow
not pumping any air
my breathing is shallow
what will I do
when my life is gone
how will I
finish my song
help me
everything is so hard
it reminds me of shattered glass
and I'm just a shard
help me repave these roads
help me fix my life
save me from hurt, cut it out of my heart
with the sharpest available knife!

by kitcat92
posted on 06/27/2007

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Comment by Heelerscwgirl: Jun 27, 2007 9:40 am
I know how you feel in this poem. I think all people have felt this before. It's a great poem. It flows really well.

Comment by LITTLEmissBLENDER: Jun 27, 2007 11:09 am
NICE!
Comment by myloveeyeliner: Jun 27, 2007 6:05 pm
*tear*loved it
Comment by tearsofrain: Jun 27, 2007 8:12 pm
WOW! i love the whole thing, till about the last two lines.
but yah, you totally captured everything i feel, and wrote it with a very good flow. good job!
Comment by PoemWritingGuy: Jun 27, 2007 11:10 pm
Awesome expression. One of my first poems was also called "Help Me". I can really relate. Well done. Vote up.
Comment by Reece: Jun 27, 2007 11:44 pm
i agree with tears, its nice and all, until the last 2 lines Sad face Sorrie
Comment by missingmom: Jun 28, 2007 7:45 am
We all have to experience pain to know the joy of feeling happy! It's the give and take of life. You should read Kayla's poem, Golden Days. Nice writing in your poem, I hope you find some happiness soon. Smiley
Comment by BrokenSuicide: Jul 3, 2007 6:07 pm
It is all truth, and Star Clan thanks you for thy words of purity.
Comment by Twilight: Jul 4, 2007 12:25 pm
Wow! I feel the same way! I give it two thumbs up!
Comment by emily92: Aug 21, 2007 6:41 pm
whoa!! this is really good, i cant believe you never told be bout it, some friend you are, jk jk! well you got 9 comments on it, and its your first poem, ive never got that many! good job, luv ya tons!! keep writing!!
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