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Hate Me, please

In the silence I hear whispers calling,
Reminding me of how far i've fallen,
Dreads iron grip around my heart,
Threatens to peel me apart,
And with it take my broken life,
From this hell I hold so tight,
This pain posions me with the tease of death,
But she shows nothing of any kind in her breath,
Thats more punishment than lucifers fire,
killing me with my own desire,
I only crave for her to show some sign,
even hate would be so kind.

by poetryismusic
posted on 04/15/2008

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Comment by LostInside: Apr 15, 2008 12:58 pm
wow thats a really good poem
Comment by hiddeninblood: Apr 15, 2008 1:54 pm
my god.... this poem is fukin amazing...espescailly a quick one....i'll vote up
Comment by MechanicalAnimal: Apr 15, 2008 3:02 pm
Fucking awesome poem. Excellent.
Comment by DeadPoet: Apr 15, 2008 3:10 pm
Shall I go with the crowd and say "fucking awesome"? It was very descriptive. I espceially loved "this pain posions me with the tease of death". Deep.
Comment by DeadPoet: Apr 15, 2008 3:13 pm
Damn it!! Another spelling mistake! *sheepishly* I meant "especially".
Comment by KelseyJanet07: Apr 16, 2008 11:08 am
I like the part where you wrote "killing me with my own desire". Totally awesome line! Keep writing!
Comment by sajinn: Apr 16, 2008 1:49 pm
omg!!i luv this!!!
Comment by dark1angel2: Apr 17, 2008 7:06 am
i like it lol!
Comment by funkygiglydoll: Apr 18, 2008 11:13 am
I only crave for her to show some sign,
even hate would be so kind.
nice ending..your own desires then,okay..
full of emotions,didn't waste any words,just expressing what u are feeling directly,just like on the pc,get online and get writing with fire..keep it up..
this is what i call a true dark one..no mercy here guys.
Comment by childOFtheNIGHT: Apr 18, 2008 8:30 pm
OHMYGODDDD THIS IS SOOO GOOOD!! LOVE UR POEMS! short and reallyyy realllyy goood..i tried to pick a favourite line but i love all of it ..lovee this!!
Comment by ashen: Apr 19, 2008 2:10 am
i love this. its great
Comment by SPAGACKULA: Apr 20, 2008 2:37 am
Dynomite!
Comment by AshFlowers: Apr 25, 2008 4:14 pm
I think it is simply wonderful

and to spagackula...
that comment is hillarious, lmao
Comment by asdfyz: Apr 28, 2008 10:25 am
amazing to put it simply
Comment by huzi8t9: Jun 10, 2008 10:06 pm
wow.. That's amazing - vote up
Comment by ashuhhland: Jul 2, 2008 9:35 pm
this is wonderful
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