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Fly

Can i fly?

Can i soar up high

where no one can see the tears

dropping in my eyes?

Can I have wings?

to help me cArry on the journey i want to continue?

Can I be up there?

where nO oNe cAn judge thE reaL me?

by siLeNce16
posted on 03/28/2008

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Comment by poemsarebliss: Mar 29, 2008 5:34 am
good one..
Comment by tobeloved: Mar 29, 2008 8:49 am
Wow.. really good. Keep writing.
Comment by DeadPoet: Mar 29, 2008 9:42 pm
I hate to say this but I think people would like this poem better if you didn't captalize random letters, it looks slightly immature to me. But it is really good, I like the rhyme schemeSmiley
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