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fire
i touch the fire and it freezes me
i look into it and its black
why cant i feel
my skin should crack and peel
i want the fire back
every thing i lack
comes back to haunt me
no compassion
no life, no lust
why cant i feel
i should feel this treacherous heart beating
but i dont
why cant i feel?
by meltedsnowman
posted on 04/28/2008
i look into it and its black
why cant i feel
my skin should crack and peel
i want the fire back
every thing i lack
comes back to haunt me
no compassion
no life, no lust
why cant i feel
i should feel this treacherous heart beating
but i dont
why cant i feel?
by meltedsnowman
posted on 04/28/2008
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Comment by foreverendeavor1790: Apr 28, 2008 11:33 am
i understand where you are coming from i have been there and i still feel numb like i can't feel anything from time time
so your not alone...
and if you ever need anybody to talk to i feel free to come to me when ever you like if you need a friend to be there for you...
Comment by HeartlessAngel: Apr 28, 2008 11:34 am
that's a really great poem.Comment by hiddeninblood: Apr 28, 2008 11:43 am
this is a really great poem....
Comment by DarkAngel692008: Apr 28, 2008 11:49 am
I like this poems its so awsomeComment by google: Apr 28, 2008 12:56 pm
very good poem.
refreshingly so.
I enjoyed the rhymn scheme
you schemer you.
you requested a comment.
"every thing" would probably be better as "everything", one word. and maybe more punctuation to let the reader know when to slow down and pause except your line breaks are excellent, giving us the poem in logical portions.
Comment by TylerS23: Apr 28, 2008 1:09 pm
very very well writtenComment by Tauntingviper: Apr 28, 2008 1:39 pm
look for the future, open your heart to what you know you really want. I will help you feel again...you know thatComment by tobeloved: Apr 28, 2008 2:42 pm
very well written.. i like it =)Comment by gothchik13: Apr 28, 2008 5:18 pm
that was bangin'! nice poem!!
Comment by EmoPoetry: Apr 29, 2008 7:29 pm
I love this poem.
It's different.
Comment by Rouge: Apr 30, 2008 12:49 am
nice poem, i get what fire can bring but when its gone you cant help but miss it even though it hurts to touch itComment by mysterygrl: May 13, 2008 11:19 am
wow this is an amazing poem i like it a lot. i voted up
especially because you sometimes feel numb, and lost from just doing the same thing over and over again