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Final Call

My days are filled with sorrow
My nights are filled with shame
And this time come tomorrow
Everything will be the same

I'll still make mistakes,
I'll still search for an end
And if I don't catch that lucky break
The pain inside will never mend

Tears will continue to fall
Laughs will slowly cease
And if I make the final call
It will be in death that I find peace

by freespirit252
posted on 11/05/2009

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Comment by Healer: Nov 5, 2009 6:54 pm
hmm, wow very good, hmm,. how intersting!
Comment by meltedsnowman: Nov 5, 2009 6:57 pm
hmm.just keep looking. thats only the thing i could say. its a good poem. but its scray too. dont make that call. u r loved more then you think you are.
Comment by kingOVDAwest: Nov 5, 2009 7:05 pm
i wouldent call this a dark poem but it's good
great job
keep writing
Comment by xDestructive: Nov 5, 2009 7:29 pm
This is a very sad poem, people see death as putting an end of all their misery, but it's also the end of the good things that we have not yet experienced, but I bet you already heard something like that so I'll just say this is a very sad poem, and tis written good, nice rhymes, keep up the good work!
Comment by DaniDarlz: Nov 5, 2009 8:18 pm
yay it rhymes!
finally something that rhymes!
Comment by Clvisugo: Nov 5, 2009 9:01 pm
OMG!! That is sooo sad!!

I can totally connect with this - beautifully written!!
Comment by flippinthrulife17: Nov 6, 2009 5:37 am
Hmmm....This is saddening for me...and it seems full of despair...makes me wince but...it's really well-written
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