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Feelings

Tired, exhausted
Mentally, physically
Breaking me
Down,

Dreaming, waking
Falling, fading
Right into the
Ground,

Wanting, wishing
Pleading, begging
For a
Bed,

Praying, hoping
Desiring, needing
A place to rest her
Head,

Every day, every night
Strife, another fight
There’s to much on her
Mind,

Looking, searching
Realizing, finding
Out that she is
Blind,

Losing, forgetting
Forgiving, regretting
That she ever
Knew,

Calling, whispering
Shrieking, yelling
Someone that once was
You.


by LuciferhasFallen
posted on 12/31/1969

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Comment by gothic666angel6: Dec 21, 2006 12:52 pm
cool poem... i hope we get to hang out this weekend!!! i gots lots of updates bout traitor and boner... and my english teacher was questioning me and like suggesting i go out with this one weird kid i was like "NO!!!!!!"
Comment by unpredictable: Dec 21, 2006 12:52 pm
WOW! i luv this! this is a RAELLY great poem! good choice of words and everything! its just awsome. keep writing!
Comment by LuciferhasFallen: Dec 21, 2006 1:01 pm
tankya both!
Comment by DyslexicParanoia: Dec 21, 2006 2:07 pm
excellent writting.
Comment by LuciferHasFallen: Dec 21, 2006 3:26 pm
^..^ tanks!
Comment by sammy333: Dec 30, 2006 10:04 pm
Omg I luv that poem wow far out words can't explain how good that is lol
Comment by LuciferHasFallen: Dec 31, 2006 2:18 pm
tankya very much!
Comment by gothic666angel6: Jan 9, 2007 1:50 pm
ha!!! i just gotta comment now and then comment again and then i hath stoleneth YOUR 9th comment!!! hehehe
Comment by gothic666angel6: Jan 9, 2007 1:50 pm
ha! my 9th comment, you shall not take it!
Comment by tearsofrain: Jan 9, 2007 2:51 pm
thats so great. wowzers. i lvoe it the flow teh wording the everything. amazing job. um i guess i get the tenth then... lmao
Comment by LuciferHasFallen: Jan 11, 2007 6:54 am
Tankya both... and Leiko... imma hurt you...
Comment by romantichomicide: Jul 21, 2008 10:12 pm
the ending was a surprise!!
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