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feast of the dogs

his dog is with her, and it is eating
lapping the blood that she is bleeding
she beats the dog as it starts to bite
eating the flesh that has turned white
her dad is watching, just standing there
watching the dog like he is scared
"daddy, daddy why won't you help?!"
she hits the dog, it gives out a yelp
"oh right of course! you poor thing!"
he picks up a knife and starts to sing
he gets real close to feel the meat
he tastes the blood and says it's sweet
"daddy? what are you..."she starts to cry
"helping, my dear, helping you die!"
"no daddy stop!"her dad starts to chop
she begs and cries but he won't stop
holding the blade and digging it in
"this feels so good!it can't be a sin!"
she starts to scream and beg for death
he kills her slowly until her last breath
he looks at the mess and says"what a feast!"
he starts to eat and so does the beast

by sajinn
posted on 05/18/2008

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Comment by deadlyinluv24: May 19, 2008 10:32 am
holy crap thats awesome! i cant believe this its depressing but awesome!how did u come up with something like that?!!?!?!?!?!?!?! damn thats good!!!!!!!!!!
Comment by Holychild: May 23, 2008 11:11 pm
dang. when, were and how. I must also know your inspration came from.
Comment by sajinn: May 26, 2008 6:42 pm
me and my dad had a fight....so i created a poem to discribe how i felt about him.....
Comment by zoe: May 27, 2008 5:45 pm
thats a fucking good poem....i need some poem tips
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