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Fearing the day

Life goes by with days of tears
Life is gone so be good my dear
Sing a song write a book be remembered for being a cook
Life will continue with out you
But let by gones be by gones
Let the day be the day
Take the opportunity, dont throw love away
Yet every night as you drift asleep
A message will be spoken in your dreams
Its not sleeping that keeps me up all night
Nor is it dreams that make me afraid to lie down
Yet the fear of tommorow will never dampen
I fear the potential of tommorow
Feeling the sorrow of the day
Just waiting or me to screw up and you to say
Goodbye its been real
Fearing bugging you to death till you cant stand me
I dont fear my dreams
Afraid love would drift away
I fear the next day

by BrokenHeartsTornUpLetters
posted on 05/08/2008

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Comment by Darryn732: May 8, 2008 4:16 pm
Great poem Smiley I like It
Comment by Targus100: May 8, 2008 4:55 pm
Good poem but no need to fear tomorrow. it may have potential to make you sad but it has the potential to make you happyier than you've ever been aswell
Comment by scarsofsecrets: May 8, 2008 6:43 pm
i like it. good job
Comment by SPAGACKULA: May 8, 2008 9:11 pm
It's always darkest before dawn.
Thumbs up !
I like it.
Comment by asdfyz: May 9, 2008 6:39 am
What SPAG said. things will get worse, then they will get better!

your poem is AMAZING btw. It is one of my favorites on here. All the rhetorical stratigies you use in here jsut make the more SOOOO good. LOVE IT
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