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Fall

Let the tears fall they dont cause you harm
Let them run till they drip down with the blood on your arm
Try not to faint at the smell of the rust
Just keep those tears coursing down your cheeks
Pale skin like the moon above a heart frozen full of love
Youll never see the real one the real and true
As these tears just keep coursing down down down
Weep away the floor till your all numb inside
Yet hold your head hight becuase they will kill to see you fall

by BrokenHeartsTornUpLetters
posted on 05/13/2008

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Comment by InMyDreams: May 13, 2008 3:19 pm
Hey.. very true poem, it's really good. It's hard, everythings falling a part and in a way you have to be strong in front of everyone to prove theyre wrong.. but when i get sad then, i can't help but get to a point and think i need to move on, theyre not worth it, im giving up again.. but yeah, definitely keep writing
Comment by TaintedThorn: May 13, 2008 5:43 pm
amazing....really tragic...but thats what i love about it....fantistic poem....
Comment by NeVeRmOrE: May 13, 2008 9:21 pm
good poem
Comment by mariana: May 14, 2008 4:46 pm
It's good, good job...
Comment by DarkDay: May 14, 2008 5:57 pm
Wow, I'm IN LOVE with this poem, very nicely written, just wow.. very powerful
Comment by AFireInYourEyes18: May 15, 2008 5:56 am
good poem bubbloo... hmm coulda sworn i heard that last line somwhere... hey i'm always here if you wanna talk bud
Comment by MonsterBabies: May 15, 2008 8:53 am
I think the last line is from a song
Comment by BrokenHeartsTornUpLetters: May 15, 2008 1:32 pm
idk where its from i just remebered it
Comment by tobeloved: May 15, 2008 5:47 pm
wow.. excellent poem, i really like it. Although it's really well.. tragic in ways. But very good job!
Comment by writingmysoulsdiary: May 16, 2008 9:43 am
this is really good-keep writing never stop
Comment by EmoBabyGurL: May 17, 2008 1:06 pm
I love it. It expressed EXACTLY how I feel at this moment..or last night anyways.
Comment by AngelicallyBroken: May 17, 2008 4:47 pm
amazing!
Comment by vampireheart: May 17, 2008 4:57 pm
i love it!
Comment by thatgirlyoucantforget: May 17, 2008 6:48 pm
that's reeeally good! keep it up!
Comment by fallen: May 29, 2008 9:51 pm
wow...it's very amazing
Comment by Crayola: Jun 14, 2008 3:52 pm
Yes this one speaks to me <3 it.
Comment by ashuhhland: Jun 26, 2008 1:58 am
i love how you said the second line. this is such a good poem. its sad but i think a lot of people are able to relate to what you said
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