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Eaten Alive


I feel it inside,
the fear that I've tried
To cover up and hide

The fear that I hold
Has eaten me whole
And spit me out into the cold

It's chills creeping down my spine
I shiver externally on the outside
And quiver in fear, scared for my life

I fall into a coma and i start hallucinating
I see myself dying, based off the fears I'm creating
Bloodied in lying, agonizing suffering I'm facing










Oct 25th, 2009
Cody Potter

by Loveformusicandpoetry1790
posted on 11/06/2009

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Comment by mybeloved: Nov 6, 2009 10:08 am
wow. this is rly nice.
Comment by Loveformusicandpoetry1790: Nov 6, 2009 10:12 am
it is an imaginative poem, one i thought up but couldn't seem to finish.. hope you like it though.. feel free to add to it if you have any ideas..*smiles*
Comment by prettyspl: Nov 6, 2009 11:55 am
Wonderful! It made me think about how so many people probably feel this .. but yes, it's so hard to put into words because maybe we don't understand it?I really liked it! : )
Comment by sonara: Nov 6, 2009 12:44 pm
i feel that to,but worser
Comment by flippinthrulife17: Nov 6, 2009 3:09 pm
whoa *shivers* this is pretty...uhmm...O.O
I don't even have a word for it! lol but to be honest, I was able to take this and twist it into my own interpretation and i think it's pretty cool...but...*frowns a little* sad...very sad Sad face
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