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Death is blissful

I will stab a knife right through your heart
and lick the blood
from frozen tipped steel
and I kiss my way down
your cold pale cheeks
and rest my head on your chest
tracing my fingers along
from scar tattooed neck
I listen to you empty chest
and tap it listening to hollowness
looking into your blood shot eyes
I fall into a trance
stroking your hair in solace
and I hold your hand
in loving darkening bliss
and I wrap my chain arms
around your beautiful lifeless corpse
and think how death becomes you
and smear poison lip gloss on your lips
and kiss you passionately
in darkness love
and close my eyes blissfully
and welcomes death in your arms

by Darkdaydreamer
posted on 08/25/2009

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Comment by scorpi: Sep 1, 2009 6:48 am
really dark cool
Comment by Uncertain: Aug 26, 2009 12:52 pm
WOW! dark! Odly enough, I absolutely love it, totaly amazing
Comment by papai: Aug 27, 2009 4:28 am
When in search of a dark poem you never let us down... good job...
Comment by jjxx1992: Aug 26, 2009 8:21 pm
wow what a sick story. I like it. very nice
Comment by fanpirewerevocate: Sep 2, 2009 2:50 pm
excellent!
Comment by mistressofdarkness: Aug 25, 2009 7:24 pm
wow dark, amazing
Comment by rosky71: Aug 25, 2009 7:26 pm
o this is dark i like it
Comment by JamesR: Sep 1, 2009 7:27 am
Creepy, Whatever floats your boat I suppose. Not for me though. Well written regardless. Just...creepy
Comment by monkeyboy2416: Aug 28, 2009 9:00 am
Whatever gets you off i suppose...
Comment by TearsFall: Aug 28, 2009 8:22 am
Definitely dark. I oddly loved it.
Comment by Psychobabble: Sep 29, 2009 6:38 pm
What a great poem
Comment by TeffaTheVampireGoddess: Aug 29, 2009 10:39 pm
I love it!
I wish I was the corpse!
Such beautiful passion is wasted on the unworthy. Teffa is thou name. Love me.
Comment by rickygone: Aug 25, 2009 8:05 pm
DAmn.. thas hardcore dude. thats good stuff..
Comment by SarinaBear: Aug 28, 2009 12:51 pm
I love it.
Comment by Elizajh: Aug 28, 2009 5:29 pm
yeah I oddly loved it too seeing as I'm not normally for all the darkness...great work...
Comment by PoeticDarkenss: Aug 29, 2009 9:58 am
Omg thats amazing Smiley
Comment by xxxpainxxx: Aug 29, 2009 9:59 am
I absoultle, posittively, ironiclly LOVE IT! Your poem is Amazing!
Comment by RV: Aug 29, 2009 11:19 am
DARK, COLD, ITS BLOOD
Comment by Haylo: Aug 29, 2009 1:09 pm
it was good. though sort of weird. it really put a picture in my head and made my mind go cold. very good job. Keep writing!
Comment by Alexanne: Aug 29, 2009 7:03 pm
awesome!
Comment by daftjake: Sep 6, 2009 3:10 pm
Dark Smiley
Comment by XxKatieKhaosxX: Sep 8, 2009 1:35 pm
wow.. : ) nice poetry.
Comment by lisalou: Sep 8, 2009 6:59 pm
very good
Comment by temptedfate: Sep 10, 2009 10:05 pm
this is great
Comment by deathsmessanger: Sep 15, 2009 9:35 am
This is the best and i do mean best poem i have read in a while.
Comment by GreshamGirl09: Sep 16, 2009 9:13 am
i like this one... i can compare it to me and i do belive that is what gets a readers attention...
Comment by nessa123412: Sep 18, 2009 1:42 pm
great poem i love it dark and nice
Comment by deadinside212: Sep 22, 2009 6:36 pm
amazingg poem i love it
Comment by Xenoz: Oct 3, 2009 1:11 pm
Totally dark, quite creepy, and AMAZING!
Comment by Xeroz: Oct 5, 2009 6:12 pm
thats deep i love it
Comment by reireitenohira: Oct 8, 2009 1:50 pm
Reminds me of Romeo and Juliette. Very well done.
Comment by Cole: Oct 8, 2009 9:19 pm
good stuff
Comment by amethystangel7: Oct 18, 2009 7:41 pm
Incredible really. dark, intense and unique. love it!
Comment by SweetTea: Oct 27, 2009 7:18 pm
This is so out their...I love love love it!!!!
Comment by xmyxlastxbreathx: Oct 29, 2009 11:23 pm
Dark and amazing -votes up- Smiley
Comment by kingOVDAwest: Nov 5, 2009 7:08 pm
wow thats an amazing poem amazing job
it's so dark and full of emotion and feeling

Comment by mistressofdarkness: Nov 7, 2009 3:19 pm
I want to thank everyone who is always commenting on my poetry
It means alot to me you guys!
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