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Death's Syrup

I bid adieu to the sun,
Wave from my window
And sip more of Death’s Syrup.

A vile concoction,
Sour and bitter,
Sweet and decayed;

A taste of hell;
A taste of death.

Ah, sunset, the death of another day;
This is my way of coping.

It fizzes in my mouth before oozing down my throat:
Sticky, warm,
Like fresh blood only sweeter.

Soon it shall take some of my life;
Such is the nature of Death’s Syrup.
This is my way of mourning
All that has been lost
On this dismal day.

Red, grey, green, black;
The colors flash before my eyes
As I step
Between the boundaries of living and dead.

The pained thoughts swim around me
Fading in and out of sight.

Will someone find me this time?
Would they want to?
…Who would care to stop me?

I drain my glass;
Skeletal hands close around my arms.
Flames draw closer;
They smother me and I am gone.

by kazedragon
posted on 07/04/2009

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Comment by Loveformusicandpoetry1790: Jul 5, 2009 10:26 am
Wow!! Death's syrup.. with a name like that a really didn't know what to expect.. But when i read it!! holy shit & wowz!!lol it turned out to be something i never really would of knew if i hadn't read it.. Anyways It amazes me' and you did a genius piece.. Very good*smiles*
Comment by SilentWords: Jul 6, 2009 4:32 pm
very creative, sounds like some nasty syrup though..
Comment by draydanljr: Jul 6, 2009 3:51 am
great stuff wouldent care to speculate as to the inspiration but obviously inspired
Comment by JoeV: Jul 4, 2009 11:23 pm
Outstanding!! Vote up on a terrific piece. Bravo!
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