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death

You lie there bleeding to death on the kitchen floor,
with a bloody read knife by your hand.
You stare at the cieling,
and watch all your life,
everything you have fades away.
You did what you must you should be happy now,
but you forgot that you can never come back.
And now you wish you could,
But now its all over,
every thing you grew to love...gone.

by vampireheart
posted on 06/28/2007

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Comment by LITTLEmissBLENDER: Jun 28, 2007 2:13 pm
VERY NICE, BUT CEILING IS SPELT WITH AN EI, NOT IE Smiley
Comment by sweetxdreamsXOXO: Jul 17, 2007 9:23 am
:] ive read this one i love it
Comment by asdfyz: Aug 21, 2008 6:45 pm
hmm it is good, I would really like to see how your writing evolves as you are on here. YOu have some talent, and (i know mine has) your style will change throughout your experience on here. You could definitely produce some great stuff
This poem is very emotional. IT is obvious it's about cutting, but look up once in a while. I don't know how your life is, but look up once in a while. Do something fun! go dance in the rain! something that will wash away the bad thoughts and you feel refreshed after. IT is so liberating.
great poem. Keep on writing.
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