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Darkness pulls me down

A dark past surrounds me
even to this day
I cant get over it
I tried every way!
Trauma really screws you up
changes how you think
and sooner or later
you'll begin to sink.
Memories drag you down
deep into the dark
where no light can reach you
not even a spark.
All hope is lost
covered by nipping fires
and in this abyss
love for life expires.
All thas left is death
a wish for no pain
hoping for the end to find you
stop this acid rain!
Toxic air fills my lungs
a poison touch of hate
if someone tried to help me
it would be to late.
My life will be gone
nothing in my eyes
just a hollow body
with hollow lies.
Everyone has problems
just notthe same as you
we al hate it when they say:
"I know what your going through".
The hell we call life
like fire all around
theres othing left for me...
So Darkness Pulls Me Down.

by LostInDarkness
posted on 10/30/2009

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Comment by KAS: Oct 30, 2009 3:32 pm
Great
Comment by flippinthrulife17: Oct 30, 2009 4:25 pm
This is so depressing, and dark. Saddening, anguished. you expressed yourself very well, but ...seems like you need someone to talk to? If you do, I'm here to listen
Comment by james1989: Oct 30, 2009 7:08 pm
this is a very sad poem i can tell just but reading this poem you are going through a difficult time and your famliy that you have where your at is there for you and always go to someone when your in a time of need go to your mother or your father for help they will help you through these difficult times or call someone that you can really trust and i can tell you this all your friends and famliy members are there for you.
Comment by Goingnowhere: Nov 3, 2009 1:43 pm
Outstanding
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