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dark waters

my heart of stone sinks in the dark waters of my sorrow
not a sound but gentle weeping from the ghost of my tomorrow
there is no bottom or a top, it goes on into the abyss
burning in hell and walking blindly just for one last kiss
your ocean dried with the tears leaving my heart to fall for an eternity
but don't feel sorry for my burning soul,i don't need your pity

by sajinn
posted on 07/14/2008

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Comment by MechanicalAnimal: Jul 24, 2008 5:33 am
Great poem. And no, I'm not in love!
Comment by sajinn: Jul 14, 2008 3:30 pm
tell me of missplellings!!
Comment by xxBlackRainbowxx: Jul 14, 2008 5:50 pm
misspellings: weeping and abyss.
good poem, it kicks ass!! =D
Comment by lostinpoetry: Jul 14, 2008 7:58 pm
Good write.
Comment by sajinn: Aug 11, 2008 5:57 pm
lol
Comment by myheartisbroken321: Sep 2, 2009 12:15 am
sounds like something randomly dark I would write... WHIP HIM GOOD
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