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Dark love

Your Nightmares haunt me
Your dreams engulf me
And your smiles tourter me
And my tears blind me
from the truth
The truth
you don't love me
and I don't love you
though we try to paint over it
with blood and tears
to hide what everyone knows
and we neglect to see
The truth
As long and we avert our eyes
and try to easily distract ourselves
though we don't whisper a word
our hearts scream it at us
The truth
Though I can see it
and see the space
which we have drifted
I turn away and pretend
that I don't notice
The truth
thought we feel it
as long as we don't see it
we can turn our hearts away
and feign innocence
But we can't escape
from the binding truth
The truth
You don't love me
And I don't love you
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watcha think please comment if you don't like it or you see a grammer mistake,
lol just tell me what you think

by alostsoul
posted on 07/02/2009

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Comment by alostsoul: Jul 5, 2009 12:35 pm
Thanks~
Comment by Loveformusicandpoetry1790: Jul 2, 2009 12:36 pm
Very Good.. Keep it up*smiles*
Comment by JoeV: Jul 2, 2009 7:00 pm
This was excellent alostsoul,

Unfortunately I know this all too well, and you couldn't have described it better. Thank you for a fine piece of writing.
Comment by hasseo23: Jul 3, 2009 12:31 am
This is amazing! good job
Comment by flippinthrulife17: Jul 15, 2009 8:26 am
wow. this is deep. It twisted my guts. If this is the truth-well, then the truth is f**ked up you know? lol
but all in all-I REALLY like this. it seems way personal. and seems to have alot of thought to it. like a confession in a poetic form. good write. :]
Comment by Darkdaydreamer: Jul 24, 2009 1:55 pm
I love this!
Comment by Aspire2: Jul 30, 2009 4:29 pm
very good
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