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the blackened depths of my soul i remain
to wither away deeper than hidden secrets.
shattered pieces of my heart spread
laying helpless upon the ruins of past lovers,
empty fates fill my hollow figure
cover the worlds surrounding,
out in nights darkness.

by broken3heart3
posted on 11/03/2008

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Comment by poemwrittingpipsqueek: Nov 3, 2008 7:45 pm
this is beautifully deep
Comment by infidel: Nov 4, 2008 10:34 am
nothing comes to my mind i cant give you any tips it's perfect
Comment by sexiichikka238: Nov 4, 2008 6:46 pm
this is amazing. its deep in thought and i love it. i hope you continue in writing ones like this Smiley
Comment by mylifeasacutter: Nov 4, 2008 9:27 pm
short...but i like it
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